分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息根據(jù)提示,給你的美國(guó)朋友Jim寫(xiě)一封感謝信,感謝你在美國(guó)游學(xué)期間對(duì)你的幫助.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信目的;闡述感謝的原因;再次表達(dá)感謝,并可表述希望有機(jī)會(huì)可以給對(duì)方回報(bào).2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
(高級(jí)句型一)Arriving there,my language was not very good…
該句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ),表示伴隨狀況;
(高級(jí)句型二)you took me out to so many places of interests,which brought me a great grasp of ancient and present-day America..
which是 一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,做主語(yǔ);
(高級(jí)句型三)I can't thank you more..
該句式里cannot否定詞和比較級(jí)more連用表示的最高級(jí);
高級(jí)詞匯:am still lost in 沉浸在…;fool愚弄;
解答 Dear Jim,
I'm writing to express my thanks for your help during my stay in the USA.I've been back home safely but I am still lost in the good days spent togeter with you and your family.(介紹寫(xiě)信的目的)
I'm really grateful for your good care and kind help in America.(高級(jí)句型一)Arriving there,my language was not very good,and do you still remember you help me with my presentation on Mr.Donald's lecture?Without your help with my language,I must have fooled myself.Besides this,(高級(jí)句型二)you took me out to so many places of interests,which brought me a great grasp of ancient and present-day America.The most touching and warmest experience was having met and stayed with your family,which is a democratic,open,friendly and encouraging family.I have to say that I love you all from the bottom of my heart.(解釋感謝的原因)
(高級(jí)句型三)I can't thank you more,and I hope in the near future you'd like to visit Beijing,China.Then,I can try my best to pay you back.I'd like to introduce you to all my family and friends,and I'm hoping to take you to the Great Wall,one of the seven wonders in the world.(再次表示感謝)
I'm looking forward to your reply.Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型.
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