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11．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華．你的英國朋友Jim準(zhǔn)備參加當(dāng)?shù)嘏e辦的"美麗中國"藝術(shù)展，來信向你咨詢．請給Jim寫封回信，為他推薦一個(gè)參展作品．信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．推薦一個(gè)作品；
2．簡單介紹該作品；
3．說明推薦的理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
I've received your letter and known you're going to take part in the Beauty of China Exhibition．Now I'm writing to recommend a special work for you．
I think you can submit a paper-cut of rooster．Paper-cutting is a kind of traditional handicrafts．In China，people like to make red paper into different patterns to decorate doors and windows for good luck and happiness．
I recommend it because it represents a particular type of Chinese folk art，and this year is the Chinese lunar year of the rooster．I'm sure visitors will be interested in your work．
If you need any help，please let me know．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的英國朋友Jim準(zhǔn)備參加當(dāng)?shù)嘏e辦的"美麗中國"藝術(shù)展，來信向你咨詢．請給Jim寫封回信，為他推薦一個(gè)參展作品．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
（高級句型一）people like to make red paper into different patterns to decorate doors and windows for good luck and happiness．
   該句使用 了動詞不定式做目的狀語，即to decorate…；
（高分句型二）I recommend it because it represents a particular type of Chinese folk art，and this year is the Chinese lunar year of the rooster．
because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，句意為因?yàn)樗�代表了一種特別的中國傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)；
高級詞匯：recommend推薦；submit提交； decorate 裝飾；represent代表；

解答 Dear Jim，
     I've received your letter and known you're going to take part in the Beauty of China Exhibition．Now I'm writing to recommend a special work for you．
   I think you can submit a paper-cut of rooster．Paper-cutting is a kind of traditional handicrafts．In China，（高級句型一）people like to make red paper into different patterns to decorate doors and windows for good luck and happiness．
 （高分句型二）I recommend it because it represents a particular type of Chinese folk art，and this year is the Chinese lunar year of the rooster．I'm sure visitors will be interested in your work．
  If you need any help，please let me know．
                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)的時(shí)態(tài)使用得當(dāng)，概括文章所要求的全部要點(diǎn)，而且能夠有效地使用語句之間的連接成分，所寫內(nèi)容連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的．