Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三的學(xué)生李華。你班交換生Jim將要參加“學(xué)在中國(guó)”留學(xué)生漢語(yǔ)演講比 賽，來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 推薦一個(gè)演講話(huà)題；

2. 說(shuō)明推薦的理由；

3. 建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。

注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)100左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Jim,

I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “Studying in China” speech contest.

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I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “ Studying in China” speech contest. I'd like to give you some suggestions.

I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history, Besides, since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them.

To do it well, I think you should choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges, Moreover, you have to practice your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently. Speaking skills are also needed, for they can help maximize the effectiveness of your speech.

I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，1. 推薦一個(gè)演講話(huà)題；2. 說(shuō)明推薦的理由；3. 建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。第二，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫(xiě)作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，獲知交換生Jim將要參加“學(xué)在中國(guó)”留學(xué)生漢語(yǔ)演講比賽，對(duì)此提出一些建議。第二段，推薦一個(gè)演講話(huà)題，說(shuō)明推薦的理由；第三段，建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。第四段，表達(dá)希望。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ): "Studying in China" speech contest, suggestions， recommend ,Chinese traditional culture，introduce the real treasure ，have a deep understanding of, impressive examples, gain the recognition of the judges, clearly and fluently, maximize the effectiveness of your speech。

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句:that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和虛擬語(yǔ)氣I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended. that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history。since 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:Besides, Moreover。

第六步：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線(xiàn)，亂擦。