Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，萬圣節(jié)剛過，你向你的美國筆友Jack介紹你校美國外教Michael領(lǐng)你們做的萬圣節(jié)活動。

要點(diǎn)： 1.活動(如做南瓜燈，玩trick or treat游戲；吃糖果；講萬圣節(jié)來歷等) ；2.意義；3.感受。

參考詞匯：南瓜燈 jack-o’-lantern; 萬圣節(jié) Halloween ; 來歷origin

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】How are you doing these days? I’m more than eager to share with you my exciting experience during Halloween!

Through various amusing and organized activities, my foreign teacher Michael had us enjoy a special and unforgettable festival. To begin with, he introduced the origin of Halloween, which made us have a better understanding of the American culture. Besides, when making jack-o’-lanterns and doing trick-or –treat games, we not only had fun in playing interesting games, but tasted real American life. In addition, to our delight, yummy sweets and candies add more pleasure to the project/festive atmosphere.

It is these activities that give me pleasure as well as cultural differences. I do love such moments providing me with great joy and knowledge. How is your Halloween? I’m looking forward to your reply.

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