Question

假設(shè)你班將舉行一次英語班會(huì)，主題為“中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何使用家長給的零花錢”。請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；
2. 參考詞匯：零花錢—pocket money
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Answer 1

不唯一
With the developing of our living standard, we get more and more pocket money given by our parents or relatives. But how should we spend it?
First of all, you can save it in the bank to cultivate a good habit of saving money. When you really need money you can take it out. Secondly, you can buy some book, on science or arts which bring more knowledge. Or, you are interested in stamp collecting, music or sports, you can spend your pocket money on it.
School students may make different choices on their pocket money. But never waste it just eating or playing electronic games.

試題分析：考生應(yīng)不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，演講稿的格式已給出，這降低了寫作難度�？忌�首先要仔細(xì)審題，包括以下幾個(gè)方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)（2）語氣（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。
點(diǎn)評：作文要層次清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)流暢，切合作文要求，語氣誠懇。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色，使用高級詞匯及句型。