Question

【題目】假定你是學(xué)生王明。有一批埃及中學(xué)生來到北京。學(xué)校派你給他們當(dāng)導(dǎo)游，領(lǐng)他們參觀長城。參觀前，由你介紹長城。內(nèi)容包括以下幾點：

1．向客人作自我介紹,對他們參觀長城表示歡迎；

2．長城同金字塔(pyramid)一樣，是世界奇觀之一。長城有兩千多年的歷史，長6000多公里，高6—7米，寬4—5米，現(xiàn)在是旅游勝地；

3．長城和金字塔一樣，都是幾千年前勞動人民修建的。中埃兩國人民都是世界上偉大的人民。我們?yōu)榇硕�自豪�?/span>

埃及 Egypt

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That’s all．Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

May I have your attention, please?

I’m Wang Ming. Welcome to China. It’s my great honor to be your guide when you visit the Great Wall. The Great Wall of China, like the pyramids in Egypt, is one of the wonders of the world. It has a history of more than 2000 years. It is over 6,000 kilometers long, 6—7 meters high and 4—5 meters wide. Now it’s a place of great interest. Like Pyramids, the Great Wall was built by working people thousands of years ago. The Chinese people and the Egyptian people are both great people in the world, and we are proud of this.

Seeing is believing. I hope you can have a good time on the Great Wall.

Thank you for your attention！

【解析】

試題分析：本文是要求作為導(dǎo)游向一批埃及中學(xué)生介紹長城。文章給出了漢語提示。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

亮點說明：

1.使用高級句型：被動語態(tài)Like Pyramids, the Great Wall was built by working people thousands of years ago.和金字塔一樣，長城幾千年前很多工人們建造的。諺語Seeing is believing眼見為實。2.使用了重要短語：one of the wonders奇觀之一 a place of great interest名勝；are proud of以…而自豪；have a good time 玩得開心。