Question

3．假如你是李華，你的班級(jí)打算在暑假組織一次班級(jí)活動(dòng)，有兩種活動(dòng)方案供大家選擇：
一   慈善義賣幫助家庭有困難的同學(xué)；
二   組織一次班級(jí)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)．
請(qǐng)你選擇其中一個(gè)方案，用英語寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，提出對(duì)該項(xiàng)活動(dòng)方案的建議并談?wù)勌岢鼋ㄗh的理由．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
Our class is planning to organize a class activity during the coming summer vacation．                         

Answer 1

分析 這是關(guān)于暑假班級(jí)活動(dòng)話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一交代寫作背景；二提出建議以及理由．
高分句型：
1．I have a preference for holding a charity sale during this vocation，the reasons for which lie in the following aspects．句子里 have a preference for 表示"偏愛"；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句；lie in 表示"存在于"；the following aspects．表示"以下幾個(gè)方面"．
我更喜歡在假期舉行一次慈善義賣，原因存在于以下幾個(gè)方面．
2．In a word，it is good for us to hold the charity sale，for which can help those in want of help and do benefits to our personal development句子里it在形式主語，代指動(dòng)詞不定式to hold the charity sale；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指the charity sale； in want of 表示"需要"；do benefits to 表示"對(duì)…有好處"．
總之，舉行一次慈善義賣對(duì)我們有好處，因?yàn)檫@可以幫助那些需要幫助的人，對(duì)我們的個(gè)人發(fā)展有利．

解答 Our class is planning to organize a class activity during winter vacation．There are two activities to choose from．One is to hold a charity sale and the other is to organize a graduation evening party．（交代寫作背景） 
     I have a preference for holding a charity sale during this vocation，the reasons for which lie in the following aspects．【高分句型一】First of all，the money earned in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need．This will not only help them through difficulties，but also give them warmness and happiness．Moreover，it will also benefit us a lot．For instance，we will grasp the significance of being considerate and thoughtful．Besides，giving others a hand also makes us delightful．In a word，it is good for us to hold the charity sale for which can help those in want of help and do benefits to our personal development．【高分句型二】（提出建議以及理由）

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