Question

【題目】春天來(lái)了，萬(wàn)物復(fù)蘇，陽(yáng)光明媚。假如你是高三(1)班班長(zhǎng)李華，請(qǐng)你發(fā)一份書面倡議，鼓勵(lì)大家多進(jìn)行戶外活動(dòng)，愉悅身心，調(diào)整狀態(tài)，以迎接緊張的學(xué)習(xí)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Boys and girls，

Spring has come.

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls，

Spring has come. It brings us warm sunshine, green grass, colorful flowers as well as sweet taste of air. It is the very time to refresh us from tiredness. In order to gain the best physical and spiritual state for further study, I propose all of us go outdoors to take part in more activities, such as spring outing, jogging, mountainclimbing, cycling and so on, which can rest our body and mind. With these activities, we can enjoy the country life, away from city noise and dust. We can also feel physical and mental pleasure. Thus we are sure to be more energetic and obtain high learning efficiency. So for the benefit of ourselves, go out and jump in the fresh right now.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封書面倡議，鼓勵(lì)大家多進(jìn)行戶外活動(dòng)，愉悅身心，調(diào)整狀態(tài)，以迎接緊張的學(xué)習(xí)。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1. 鼓勵(lì)大家多進(jìn)行戶外活動(dòng)。

2. 詞數(shù)100左右。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

as well as；In order to；propose；take part in；such as；

第三步：連詞成句

1. Spring has come. It brings us warm sunshine, green grass, colorful flowers as well as sweet taste of air.

2. It is the very time to refresh us from tiredness.

3. In order to gain the best physical and spiritual state for further study, I propose all of us go outdoors to take part in more activities, such as spring outing, jogging, mountainclimbing, cycling and so on, which can rest our body and mind.

4. So for the benefit of ourselves, go out and jump in the fresh right now.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改