Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)下面一幅圖片的觀察, 給一家知名報(bào)社專欄“Voice Your Opinion”寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)與看法。

注意:1. 自選角度和內(nèi)容;

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)100 左右;

3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Dear editor,

In Chinese tradition, family reunion always plays a very important part in communication.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

In Chinese tradition, family reunion always plays a very important part in communication. When a national holiday falls, members of a family will probably gather together to visit the seniors and enjoy being with each other. In this picture, we can see that grandchildren of different ages are surrounding their granny. However, all of them merely focus their attention on smartphones and nobody seems to talk with their granny willingly. We can imagine how helpless and disappointed their granny is at the sight of this. Behind the picture also lies the fact that smartphones are depriving us of face-to-face communication with others, even among dearest ones. What a pity! I hope that we should respect the moments when we are together for a reunion and throw the smartphones aside !

Best wishes !

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文考查看圖作文。首先考生應(yīng)該認(rèn)真讀圖，把握中心。一幅圖常為議論文，時(shí)態(tài)通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可以分為三段寫，第一段概述照片內(nèi)容，常用開頭語有:In the picture above we can see...; There is a cartoon about...; As we can see in the picture...; From the picture,

we can see that...; 或者It can be seen/concluded from the picture that...等等。第二段描述這幅照片所展示何種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象及造成該現(xiàn)象的原因，這一段應(yīng)該是重點(diǎn)，要詳寫。第三段談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和看法，常用句型有：From what has been mentioned above, we may conclude that...; Therefore, it is not difficult to come to the conclusion that...; It is clear, therefore, that...; All in all, what really matters is... 等等。

【范文亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

When a national holiday falls, members of a family will probably gather together to visit the seniors and enjoy being with each other.開門見山點(diǎn)明中心主題。

We can imagine how helpless and disappointed their granny is at the sight of this.使用了賓語從句和短語at the sight of。

Behind the picture also lies the fact that smartphones are depriving us of face-to-face communication with others, even among dearest ones.使用了倒裝句式和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句。

I hope that we should respect the moments when we are together for a reunion and throw the smartphones aside !使用了賓語從句和狀語從句。