分析 上文是Bob寫給Smith女士的一封感謝信;信中提到:Bob參加野營時,由于Smith女士對他的幫助與鼓勵,使得他逐漸結識了其他的露營者,并獲得了很大的自信心;而且在他返回學校后,不但他的學習成績進步了,人變得活躍了,結交了新的朋友,而且現在他還收到了大學的錄取通知書;為此Bob非常感謝Smith女士,是她幫助自己變成了一個與以前截然不同的人.
解答 Dear Ms.Smith,
I appreciate your help very well.On the first day of Camp,you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After that,you always gave me specially attention and inspire me to join in activities.As the result,I gradually got to know the other campers.Because∧the help you gave me that summer.My life changed.I gained so much confidence that I returned back to school as a new person.My grades improved.I became very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.I am proud of it.I just want to thank for helping me becoming a different person.
Yours,
Bob.
詳解:
1.將well改為much 考查副詞詞義辨析"very well"意為:很好地;非常好;"very much"意為:非常;這里指的是:我非常感謝你的幫助;故用much
2.將myself改為me 考查人稱代詞 本句的意思是:當我獨自一人的時候,你走到我面前;myself指的是:我自己;而這里指的是"我";由于此處用在介詞to之后作賓語,所以應使用人稱代詞的賓格形式;故用me
3.將specially改為special 考查形容詞 此處用來修飾名詞attention,故用形容詞special
4.將inspire改為inspired 考查動詞的形式 此處與動詞gave一起在句中作并列謂語;根據上文可知,此處指的是在Bob第一次野營時發(fā)生的事情,所以應使用一般過去時;故用inspired
5.將the改為a 考查固定短語"as a result"意為:結果,因此;表示后者是前者的結果(結果可以不止一種);as the result表示特指后句為前句的唯一結果;根據下文可知,此處并非指唯一的結果;故用a
6.在Because之后加of 考查連詞because 與復合介詞 because of的區(qū)別 because of后接名詞、代詞、動名詞、what從句等;because后接句子;由于此處之后跟的是名詞the help;故在Because之后加of
7.將returned改為went或者去掉back 考查動詞及動詞短語的用法 這里的意思是:我返回了學校;固定短語"go back to"意為:回到,返回;根據上文使用了一般過去時可知,此處指的應是Bob在過去野營結束后發(fā)生的事情,故用went;另外,return back意為:回歸,歸還;由于動詞"return=go back"意為"回來,返回";故去掉其后的副詞back;故答案為:將returned改為went或者去掉
8.將but 改為and 考查連詞 本句的意思是:我變得非;钴S,并且結交了新朋友;此處表示并列關系;故用and
9.將admitting改為admitted 考查時態(tài)及語態(tài) 根據主句"I got a letter that said (我收到一封信說)"使用了一般過去時可知,此處"我被一所大學錄取了"應是發(fā)生在過去"我收到一封信"之前的動作,所以此處應使用過去完成時;由于主語 I與謂語動詞admit構成了被動關系,故此處應使用過去完成時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)"had been+動詞的過去分詞";故用admitted
10.將becoming改為 become 考查固定短語"help sb.do sth."意為:.幫助某人做某事;故用become
點評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題,主要考查學生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力.錯誤類型一般有:缺詞、多詞和錯詞.常見的錯誤有:1 詞法錯誤,主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此類試題時,需要正確分析句子成分,熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常見句法錯誤.通常表現為簡單句、復合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強調句等錯誤.解答此類試題時,需要掌握各類句子的句式結構及意義用法.3 應在理解文章大意的前提下,進行作答.
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