Question

【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)（共10處錯(cuò)誤； 每處錯(cuò)誤1分， 共10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last Saturday，our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage．As one of the volunteer，I took part in it．We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children．They were delighted to receive the gifts．In the morning，we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood．Then we cooked and had lunch here．In the afternoon，we gave them some performances．Before leaving the orphanage，we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another．Each of us had a happily time．We gave the children our care and help，but in return，they gave us their smiles and love．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉had

【2】volunteer→volunteers

【3】加as

【4】for→to

【5】when→that/which

【6】here→there

【7】take→taken

【8】they→we

【9】happily→happy

【10】but→and

【解析】

試題分析：上個(gè)周六我們?nèi)グ菰L了孤兒院，我們和那邊的孩子玩耍，度過了一段快樂的時(shí)光。

【1】去掉had 考查時(shí)態(tài)。時(shí)間是Last Saturday，是過去時(shí)，所以去掉had 。

【2】volunteer→volunteers 考查名詞。one of表示其中之一，后接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù) ，所以用volunteers 。

【3】加as 考查連詞。As well as表示同樣也，固定搭配，故加as。

【4】for→to考查介詞。Take sth to sb給某人帶某物，故用to

【5】when→that/which考查關(guān)系詞。指代some games，是物體，不是時(shí)間，可用that/which 。

【6】here→there 考查副詞。那兒，我們在那兒煮飯，故用there。

【7】take→taken 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。Have sth done，某事被做，主語photos與動(dòng)詞之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用taken。

【8】they→we 考查代詞。這樣我們可以互相聯(lián)系，所以用we。

【9】happily→happy 考查形容詞。修飾名詞time用形容詞，用happy 。

【10】but→and考查連詞。We gave the children our care and help，與in return，they gave us their smiles and love之間是承接關(guān)系，用and。