1.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中 共有 10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改 10 處,多者(從第 11 處起)不計(jì)分.
Lang Ping,head coach of China's national women's volleyball team,visited my school in Sept.17 last year.At about 9 o'clock,all the Senior 3 student gathered in the school stadium,waiting for the arrival of Lang Ping and her team.The moment Lang stepped into the stadium,nobody could stay seating.We clapped wild as we saw the schoolmaster take Lang to his seat.Then Lang shares her life with us in her speech.She said it was faith and courage had led her to success.
As the Senior 3 student,I think it was not only a fortunate experience,but also a powerful one,as Lang's words gave me strength.I will keep in mind that what she told us:Trusting yourself and fight every step of the way to win!

分析 郎平,中國(guó)國(guó)家女子排球隊(duì)主教練,去年來(lái)拜訪我們學(xué)校,所有高三的學(xué)生聚集在體育場(chǎng)等待她和她的隊(duì)員的到來(lái),大家起立迎接郎平的進(jìn)入,她在演講里和我們分享了她的生活體悟,這對(duì)于我來(lái)說有很大的幫助.

解答 Lang Ping,head coach of China's national women's volleyball team,visited my school in Sept.17 last year.At about 9 o'clock,all the Senior 3 student gathered in the school stadium,waiting for the arrival of Lang Ping and her team.The moment Lang stepped into the stadium,nobody could stay seating.We clapped wild as we saw the schoolmaster take Lang to his seat.Then Lang shares her life with us in her speech.She said it was faith and courage∧had led her to success.
As the Senior 3 student,I think it was not only a fortunate experience,but also a powerful one,as Lang's words gave me strength.I will keep in mind that what she told us:Trusting yourself and fight every step of the way to win!
解析:
1.in  改為 on.考查介詞.Sept.17 表示"九月十七日"用介詞on修飾.
2.student 改為 students.考查名詞.a(chǎn)ll the Senior 3表示"所有高三的",所以用復(fù)數(shù)students.
3.seating 改為 seated.考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞.seat表示"就座",和主語(yǔ)nobody是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以用seated.
4.wild 改為 wildly.考查副詞的用法.修飾動(dòng)詞 clapped 用副詞 wildly. 
5.his 改為 her.考查代詞.代指郎平用 her.
6.shares 改為 shared.考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài).本句講述的是過去的事,所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用過去式shared.     
7.courage 后加 that.考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句式.和 it was 呼應(yīng)構(gòu)成強(qiáng)調(diào)句式,強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)faith and courage.
8.the改為a.考查冠詞.表示"作為一名高三學(xué)生"用As a Senior 3 student.a(chǎn)是不定冠詞,表示"一個(gè)".
9.去掉 that.考查賓語(yǔ)從句.做keep in mind的賓語(yǔ)從句,表示"她告訴我們的事"用what she told us,what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句做從句的賓語(yǔ),所以去掉 that.
10.Trusting改為Trust.考查祈使句.是祈使句,和 fight every step of the way to win!并列,用動(dòng)詞原形Trust.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò).
祈使句(Imperative Sentence)
  定義:用于表達(dá)命令、請(qǐng)求、勸告、警告、禁止等的句子叫做祈使句,祈使句最常用于表達(dá)命令,因此在學(xué)校文法中也常稱為命令句.
  祈使句因?qū)ο螅粗髡Z(yǔ))是第二人稱,所以通常都省略.祈使句的動(dòng)詞都為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),句末則使用句號(hào)來(lái)表示結(jié)束.例:
  Go and wash your hands.
 。ㄈハ茨愕氖郑--命令)
  Be quiet,please.(Please be quiet.)
 。ㄕ(qǐng)安靜.--請(qǐng)求)

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

11.Apart from (除了)good service,the restaurant serves diferent kinds of traditional Fujian dishes to its customers.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

12.It seems that Chinese women have too many"national husbands"nowadays,(61)ranging (range) from popular actors to athletes.Some of these"husbands"are strong with nice muscles,(62)whilethe others are gentle,even female.
It is known that the definition of good-looking often varies(63)withsociety and time.And in ancient China,do they also look(64)attractive(attract)?
In a story(65)recorded(record) in Zuo Zhuan,a woman hesitated between a gentle man and a strong one.She eventually chose the(66)latter(late).
It wasn't until the Tang Dynasty(67)thathandsome men with strong and fit bodies regained their glory.Tang people preferred magnificent,and glorious things.As to men,the strong ones,(68)whowere good at horse riding and martial arts,were (69)highly(high) praised.
Later in the Ming and Qing dynasties,Prince Charming for women(70)turned(turn) out to be those who were thin,gentle with delicate features and good manners again.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:信息匹配

9.Becoming Refreshed without sleepingSometimes there is just not enough hours in the day to get everything done and get a good night's rest.(36)EOnce in a while you can get away with a sleepless night and still feel reasonably good by adjusting your meals and activities.
(37)A The last thing you want to do when you are tired is get warm and cozy,this will cause you to fall asleep.Keeping the air conditioner on will make you feel much more alert and refreshed.
Eat small amounts.Eating small amounts of healthy food will help refresh you.Fruit and nuts are a good choice because they are nutritious and will energize you  (38)C Try to stick to low carbon meals to keep you going.Chewing gum after your snack or small meal will also help keep you awake.
Keep it bright.When it is dark your body thinks it is time to go to sleep.Turn on lots of lights,which will trick your body into waking up and feeling better.(39)D You get double the benefits if it is daytime.
Take a break.Taking a little break will help you in the long run.Turn up some energizing music to get yourself positive.Relax and talk to a friend in person or on the phone for a few minutes.(40)G

A.Keep it cool
B.Calm down and sleep
C.Avoid big,heavy meals as they will make you tired
D.Going outside whether it is day or night for some fresh air
E.Missing sleep regularly can make you sick and should be avoided
F.When you are tired,you may just want to sit around and do nothing
G.Having a good time for a few minutes will refresh you quicker than anything else.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:閱讀理解

16.One afternoon,after finishing shopping in a supermarket,my family and I went to the checkout.I suddenly thought we didn't need any of the junk,and we abandoned all of those,saving﹩300.
That got me thinking about all our pointless expenses in life.With a promise that we'd stop if it was killing us,I convinced the family to take the leap into frugality(節(jié)儉).The rules were that we would buy nothing for 30 days except absolutely essentials.
Our adventure began with a great start.By 9 a.m.,my wife,Ruth,had already made cakes from old
strawberries and picked flowers I didn't even know we had in the garden.I cleared the car by hand for the first time for years.I read and returned the neighbor's newspaper before he woke up.Total spending on the first day:﹩0.
As days turned into weeks,we became so proficient(熟練的)at living frugally.We started riding our bikes to save gas.My child's finger painting was recycled as gift wrap for the homemade presents.We started to use an Internet application like Skype for free phone calls and ask neighbors with gardens for extra vegetables and herbs.
In the end,we saved more than $2000 by not spending for a month.When we began,I imagined we would
rush out the moment we were done and buy a lot of things in the supermarket,then maybe hit the mall or go to the movies.

24.We can infer from the passage that before that very afternoon,the familyC.
A.had had higher income and living standard
B.had adopted an advisable habit of saving money
C.had often spent money without thinking much
D.hadn't expected they would have financial problems
25.How many things were mentioned about what the family did to save on the first day of the"30days"?B
A.Two 
B.Three 
C.Four 
D.Five
26.The end of the story suggests that the familyD.
A.stopped halfway because of unexpected things
B.could barely put up with the life of frugality
C.would return to normal after the"30days"
D.succeeded in saving and changed their spending habit
27.This passage is mainly aboutC.
A.how a new idea came up 
B.a(chǎn) family's way of solving life problems
C.a(chǎn) family's no-buying try 
D.how a family managed their daily life.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

6.Avocado(牛油果) imports soar as Chinese develop taste for"butter fruit"China's soaring appetite for avocados,driven by demand from its health-conscious middle class,has made the"butter fruit"-unheard of a few years ago-the country's star performer in the (21)imported  (import) fruit market.
Exports from Latin American nations such as Mexico and Chile are rising by about 250 per cent a year,(22)leaping (leap) from just 154 tonnes in 2012 to more than 25,000 tonnes in 2016.
"More people are paying attention to healthy lifestyles and avocados meet that need,"said Zhang Hui,a sales manager at Fruitday,an online food delivery company.
Even western fast-food brands such as KFC and McDonald's are being forced to suit the changing tastes of their consumers.
Yum China,which (23)operates  (operate) 5,000 KFC stores in the country,last month launched an"avocado series"of chicken burgers and wraps slathered with guacamole(鱷梨色拉) to help upgrade the image of (24)its fried chicken chain,sourcing the fruit from Mexico.
"Avocado is viewed as a fruit (25)whose nutritional value eclipses that of many other fruits,"said Joey Wat,Yum China's chief operations officer.A planned three-week avocado promotion ended early due to high demand.
China has almost no experience (26)in commercial avocado cultivation,meaning imports are likely (27)to dominate (dominate) the market for years.
In 2011,Mexico began exports to China,where the avocado was still"(28)a very rare fruit",according to Alejandro Salas,a Mexican trade commissioner in Shanghai.He predicts that Chinese demand will help Mexico diversify away from the US,its top market."This market will be the second (29)largest (large)"he said.
Mexican officials have held events to promote the fruit,teaching chefs about avocado and tofu smoothies-but last year the country was overtaken by Chile as the dominant exporter to China.Chile has the advantage of a free-trade agreement with China,(30)while/but Mexican fruit imports have a 10 per cent tariff(關(guān)稅).

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

13.Phelps,the 31-year-old US swimming star,was seen(61)withpurple circles dotting his shoulders and back at the Rio Olympics.The circles(62)were caused(cause) by the ancient Chinese treatment,in which he is a great(63)believer(believe).The Chinese treatment,known as"baguan",uses heated glass cups(64)to create(create) a suction (吸氣) on the patient's skin,causing a circular mark.
I remember,some 40 years ago,when I fell sick,my mother always did cupping on me.It scared me.I would cry.(65)But my mother would say:"Be patient!It will hurt just a bit,like an ant bite."So I would let her,and it(66)usually(usual) helped.Now when I have fever,flu,or muscular pain I go to a"cupping spa"and get it done.Not that I don't trust medicines,but I also believe in cupping.I got it done just last month for my fever,(67)whichwasn't coming down with medicines and injections.One session of cupping and the fever was(68)gone(go).
The US National Institute of Health says on(69)its(it) website that"cupping"is considered generally safe for(70)healthy(health) people when performed by a trained health professional.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:短文改錯(cuò)

10.假定英語(yǔ)課上,老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.作文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞.
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to accept your last letter.Thanks for your concern about the heavy haze affecting normal teaching activities in our school.We have actual taken several practical measures to handle.
To begin with,attach great importance to the health of the young,our government has fixed a set of equipments to provide fresh air in our school,that can basically solve the problem.In addition to,parents donate lots of air purifiers.However,inside the buildings of our school,we did have fresh and refined air.Besides these,our school avoids outdoor activities when haze attacks.
I do believe a disturbing issue will be solved pretty soon in China.
Yours,
Li Hua.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:閱讀理解

17.This is a great truth,one of the greatest truths.It is a great truth because once we truly see this truth,we transcend (超越) it.Once we truly know that life is difficult-once we truly understand and accept it-then life is no longer difficult.Because once it is accepted,the fact that life is difficult no longer matters.
Most do not fully see this truth.Instead they complain about their problems and difficulties as if life should be easy.It seems to them that difficulties represent a special kind of suffering especially forced upon them or else upon their families,their class,or even their nation.
What makes life difficult is that the process of fa cing and solving problems is a painful one.Problems,depending on their nature,cause us sadness,or loneliness or regret or anger or fear.These are uncomfortable feelings,often as painful as any kind of physical pain.And since life causes an endless series of problems,life is always difficult and is full of pain as well as joy.
Yet,it is in this whole process of solving problems that life has its meaning.Problems are the serious test that tells us success from failure.When we desire to encourage the growth of human spirit,we encourage the human ability to solve problems,just as in school we set problems for our children to solve.It is through the pain of meeting and working out problems that we learn.As Benjamin Franklin said,"Those things that hurt,instruct."It is for this reason that wise people learn not to fear but to welcome the pain of problems.
32.From the passage,it can be inferred thatB.
A.everybody has problems
B.we become stronger by meeting and solving the problems of life
C.life is difficult because our problems bring us pain
D.people like to complain about their problems
33.The main idea of Paragraph 2 is thatD.
A.most people feel life is easy
B.the writer feels life is easy
C.the writer likes to complain about his problems
D.most people complain about how hard their lives are
34.According to the passage,we give school children difficult problems to solve in order toA.
A.encourage them to learn
B.teach them to fear the pain of solving the problem
C.help them learn to deal with pain 
D.teach them how to respect problems
35.The saying from Benjamin Franklin"Those things that hurt,instruct."suggests thatC.
A.we do not learn from experience 
B.we do not learn when we are in pain
C.pain teaches us important lessons   
D.pain cannot be avoided.

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案