Question

【題目】假設你是李華，昨天看到央視關于世界瀕危珍稀動物的報道后深有感觸，決定給世界動物保護基金會（WWF）負責人寫一封郵件，郵件的內容包括：

1. 你看完報道的感受；

2. 動物瀕危的原因；

3. 你對WWF的建議。

注意：1. 詞數100左右。

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，使得行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：deforestation 砍伐森林

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am writing to tell you how I feel after seeing a programme on CCTV about endangered animals in the world. Looking at the alarming situation the endangered animals are facing, I am deeply worried that they will soon die out if measures aren’t taken to protect them. It is surprising that these animals’ death mainly results from humans’ careless behavior, including serious pollution and deforestation. So what we should do is to stop polluting and destroying animals’ habitats.

To do this, I hope WWF can call on people to donate their money to protect these endangered animals and try to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals. Only by taking necessary measures can we save and protect these rare animals.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假設你是李華，昨天看到央視關于世界瀕危珍稀動物的報道后深有感觸，決定給世界動物保護基金會（WWF）負責人寫一封郵件，郵件的內容包括：1. 你看完報道的感受；2. 動物瀕危的原因；3. 你對WWF的建議。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數100左右。2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，使得行文連貫。3. 參考詞匯：deforestation 砍伐森林

【亮點說明】本文內容齊全，結構嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。賓語從句的使用I am writing to tell you how I feel after seeing a programme on CCTV about endangered animals in the world.現在分詞的使用Looking at the alarming situation the endangered animals are facing, I……形式主語的使用It is surprising that these animals’ death mainly results from humans’ careless behavior, including serious pollution and deforestation.倒裝句的使用Only by taking necessary measures can we save and protect these rare animals.