Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

The other day, my parents and I drive to the country to have a picnic. It was the first time that

we were driven by ourselves. We felt very excited and everything went smoothly. We had a great time. Besides, on our way back home, it began to rain. We felt a little frightened because that we were not familiar driving in the rain. What’s worse, it was getting dark. We were getting desperate when the man and his wife volunteered to lead the way. Followed their car, we finally got to the city safe. I don’t know them, but we will never forget the two kind stranger.

Answer 1

【答案】

The other day, my parents and I drive to the country to have a picnic. It was the first time that drove

we were driven by ourselves. We felt very excited and everything went smoothly.

had smooth

We had a great time. Besides, on our way back home, it began to rain. We felt a little

However

frightened because that we were not familiar∧driving in the rain. What’s worse, it was getting

with

dark. We were getting desperate when the man and his wife volunteered to lead the way.

a

Followed their car , we finally got to the city safe. I don’t know them, but we will never forget

Following safely

the two kind stranger.

strangers

【解析】

【1】第一句：drive→ drove 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語the other day判斷應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把drive改為drove。

【2】第二句：were →had 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。在固定句型：it was the first time that從句中，從句應(yīng)該用過去完成時(shí)，故把were改為had。

【3】第三句：smoothly→ smooth 考查形容詞。Go是系動(dòng)詞表示變化，后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞做表語，故把smoothly改為smooth。

【4】第五句：Besides →However 考查副詞。根據(jù)語境判斷此處是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把Besides改為However。

【5】第六句：去掉that 考查連詞。Because后面的狀語從句不再需要連詞that，故去掉that。

【6】第六句：familiar 后面加with 考查介詞。固定短語：be familiar with 意思是“對某人或某物熟悉”，故在familiar后面加with。

【7】第八句：the →a 考查冠詞。此處是第一次出現(xiàn)的man，故用不定冠詞a。

【8】第九句：Followed →Following 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。非謂語短語做狀語，句子主語和動(dòng)詞之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在分詞，故把Followed改為Following。

【9】第九句：safe →safely 考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用副詞形式，故把safe改為safely。

【10】第十句： stranger→ strangers 考查名詞。Two后面跟復(fù)數(shù)名詞，故把stranger改為strangers。