Question

13．近年來(lái)，人類對(duì)大自然的破壞引發(fā)了各種自然災(zāi)害．假如你叫李華，請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書．
主要內(nèi)容：自然中的災(zāi)害及造成的影響；拯救措施．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；文章開頭已給，不計(jì)詞數(shù)；
2．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息．
In recent years there have been many natural disasters caused by human activities，such as．floods，earthquakes and sand storms．
These natural disasters do great harm to humans．Many people don't have enough food or water．They even lost their lives and became homeless．Besides，the climate of the world becomes worse and worse．
It is time for us t o take action to protect our planet．We must stop cutting down trees and hunting animals．We have to save water and use paper on both s ides．We must try our best to save energy，or we will have nowhere to live．
Most importantly，measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment．Only a small action is meaningful to our planet，so come on and join us!A．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
We must try our best to save energy，or we will have nowhere to live
我們必須盡力節(jié)約能源，否則我們將無(wú)處可�。�
高分句型二：
Most importantly，measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment．Only a small action is meaningful to our planet，so come on and join us．
最重要的是，政府也應(yīng)該采取措施防止人們破壞環(huán)境，只有一個(gè)小小的行動(dòng)對(duì)我們的星球是有意義的，來(lái)吧，加入我們！

解答 In recent years there have been many natural disaster s caused by human activities，such as，floods，earthquakes and sand storms．
       These natural disasters do great harm to humans．Many people don't have enough food or water．They even lost their lives and became homeless．Besides，the climate of the world becomes worse and worse．
       It is time for us t o take action to protect our planet．We must stop cutting down trees and hunting animals．We have to save water and use paper on both s ides．We must try our best to save energy，or we will have nowhere to live（高分句型一）．
       Most importantly，measures should also be taken by the government to prevent people from destroying the environment．Only a small action is meaningful to our planet，so come on and join us!（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．