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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處， 多者 （從第11處起） 不計(jì)分。

In the past three years, many activities had been organized by our school. What impressed me mostly was an activity calling “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we went to a farm, where we learned knowledge and had many fun. Having been in the city for such a long time, we were more than happy to go to a countryside. After we arrived, we divided into three groups. Some students learned how to raise pigs, some worked in the garden, and the other helped the farmers with the work in the fishpond. It was not until it was totally dark when we stopped working. Though we were tired out but we felt pleased on our way back home.

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【解析】

本文是說明文。作者介紹了一項(xiàng)叫做“學(xué)習(xí)農(nóng)場(chǎng)”的學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)。

1.考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語“In the past three years”判斷句子應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，主語是many activities，助動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用have。故had應(yīng)改成have。

2.考查副詞。句意：給我印象最深刻的是一項(xiàng)被稱為“學(xué)習(xí)農(nóng)場(chǎng)”的活動(dòng)。此處most為副詞，強(qiáng)調(diào)程度上最大或最多，mostly意思為“主要地、通常”。故mostly應(yīng)改成most。

3.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。分析句子可知，call作定語修飾an activity，call與activity之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用過去分詞做定語，表示被動(dòng)。故calling改成called。

4.考查介詞。在一個(gè)秋天的下午，具體的上午或下午用介詞On。故將In改為On。

5.考查限定詞。fun是不可數(shù)名詞，用much修飾，many修飾可數(shù)名詞。故many改成 much。

6.考查冠詞。countryside為不可數(shù)名詞，前面不能用a，習(xí)慣上用the。故a改成the。

7.考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)及語態(tài)。句意：我們被分成三組。主語we與謂語動(dòng)詞divide是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，根據(jù)arrived可知，用一般過去時(shí)。故we后面應(yīng)增加were。

8.考查不定代詞。some…; others…表示“一些人……；其他人……”是固定用法。故other改成others。

9.考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。句意：天全黑了我們才停止工作。去掉It was 和when后，剩余成分能組成完整句子it was not totally dark until we stopped working.故句子是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)時(shí)間狀語not until it was totally dark，應(yīng)使用that。故when改成that。

10.考查連詞。though和but不能同時(shí)出現(xiàn)。故去掉but。