Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華， 上周五你們班參觀了中國科技館，請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Day in Museum”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：China Science and Technology Museum中國科技館

Answer 1

【答案】Last Friday, we were organized to pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum. Upon arrival, we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall. We listened very carefully and were attracted to the exhibition of science and life.

Entering the exhibition hall, we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed (CRH), the spacecraft and the rockets, which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion. Lots of us agreed that our country is on the high way to getting stronger. Knowing that there’s a chance to experience the making of the space models in person in the DIY area, we rushed to there without any hesitation. There, under joint efforts, we made a model plane with what we learned in the exhibition hall, which pleased all of us.

Time flied, we didn’t want but we had to bid farewell to the museum and the fabulous exhibition. On the way home, the school bus was boiled with excitement. We laughed and promised ourselves that we would try our best to make our motherland much stronger. In my mind, there was a sweet dream rising in which I discovered an unknown land with a new spacecraft from our Shenzhou series. I couldn’t help smiling from the bottom of my heart.

【解析】這是圖畫類書面表達(dá)，寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1. 認(rèn)真觀察圖畫，找準(zhǔn)圖畫中的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)或畫面，確定中心內(nèi)容；2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵內(nèi)容，草擬提綱，梳理文章脈絡(luò)；3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型是文章顯得更有檔次；4. 最后要認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫的情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

Upon arrival, we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall.（抵達(dá)后，他們向我們介紹了博物館的各種展覽區(qū)大廳。）使用介詞短語作狀語。

In my mind, there was a sweet dream rising in which I discovered an unknown land with a new spacecraft from our Shenzhou series.（在我的腦海里，有一個(gè)甜美的夢想，在我們的神舟系列中，我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一篇未知的土地。）There be句型，which引導(dǎo)定語從句。