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7．Human Flesh Search-thousands of individuals working to find and make public someone's personal information，mostly online-will be ruled as leaking personal data，which is against the law，according to China's top court．
Internet users or network service providers who leak people's personal information such as phone numbers，addresses，and clinical data will have to hold legal responsibility．
Network service providers will also be held responsible if they are aware that their users have violated others'rights but have failed to take action．
The decision comes after years of arguments over whether it's right for the public to try those who behave wrongly．
On the one hand，cyber hunting does have its positive influences．Some public officials have been removed from their positions after human flesh searches led to corruption investigations．During disasters like the Sichuan earthquake in 2008，the search method also helped many people to find their loved ones．
But many think that online cyber hunting is creating a threat to privacy．"People's‘unusually high enthusiasm'makes the human flesh search engine phenomenon unique，"Xujun Eberlein，a Chinese American author and commentator，told Forbes．"Participants often‘reach out their hands'thoughtlessly，violating people's rights instead of being righteous（正直）．"
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括短文大意；
2．以約120個(gè)詞就"Human Flesh Search（人肉搜索）"這一主題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：
1）你是否贊同文章提及的"禁止人肉搜索"的法案，請(qǐng)說(shuō)明你的理由；
2）"網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代，個(gè)人隱私如何才能得到保障？"請(qǐng)就此問(wèn)題，提出你的建議（至少兩點(diǎn)）．
【寫作要求】
1．可以參照閱讀材料內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)，考生首先要?dú)w納短文大意，提煉出討論的中心思想，然后再根據(jù)這一中心思想再做詳細(xì)討論．在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)：rather than而不是；take the responsibility to do有責(zé)任做某事；In addition此外；Public opinions toward this decision vary，some showing approval while others objection．這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)；it is court rather than individuals that is to take the responsibility to do the trial．這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到強(qiáng)調(diào)句．Only in these ways can we ensure network security．這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到only+狀語(yǔ)+部分倒裝；
Although the human flesh search has indeed exposed some bad guys and their wrong doings，it is court rather than individuals that is to take the responsibility to do the trial．（高分句型一）
Despite their good intentions，what these cyber hunters do is both immoral and illegal，which can greatly endanger individuals and the whole society．（高分句型二）
Only in these ways can we ensure network security．（高分句型三）

解答 The article announces that new laws are to be put out to suspend the Human Flesh Search．Public opinions toward this decision vary，some showing approval while others objection．（概括短文大意）
       Personally，I am convinced that a ban on the human flesh search is essential．Although the human flesh search has indeed exposed some bad guys and their wrong doings，it is court rather than individuals that is to take the responsibility to do the trial．（高分句型一）Despite their good intentions，what these cyber hunters do is both immoral and illegal，which can greatly endanger individuals and the whole society．（高分句型二）
       Therefore，it is high time immediate and positive measures should be adopted to address the problem．Firstly，the government must make relevant regulations and laws to protect people's online privacy．In addition，all people should enhance the awareness of the importance of privacy protection．To avoid unwanted attention，it's better for us to make personal information only available to friends．Only in these ways can we ensure network security．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．