Question

【題目】今年寒假后各校都未能如期開學，宅家網上學習（learning at home online） 是大家的共同記憶。假如你叫李華，你的美國朋友David也將開始宅家學習，想 分享你這段經歷，請電郵告知，主要內容是：

1.上網課的優(yōu)點；

2.上網課的弊端；

3.你的感悟。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。首尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Hello, David!

It's sad to know that you'll have to have classes at home.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, David!

It’s sad to know that you’ll have to have classes at home.

Owing to the outbreak of the disease, we had to have online courses at home instead of attending school after the winter holiday. Actually it is not that bad. Online courses break through the limitation of time and space, providing us with great convenience to study. But it also has some disadvantages, one of which is its bad effects on our eyesight.

All in all, very coin has two sides, and the key is to use it properly. As far as I am concerned, if you can make full use of every possible means appropriately to study, it won’t matter whether you study online or in the classroom.

Best wishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇書面表達是應用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封電子郵件：今年寒假后各校都未能如期開學，宅家網上學習（learning at home online） 是大家的共同記憶。假如你叫李華，你的美國朋友David也將開始宅家學習，想 分享你這段經歷，請電郵告知，主要內容是：1.上網課的優(yōu)點；

2.上網課的弊端；3.你的感悟。時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如； outbreak（爆發(fā)），online courses（在線課程），limitation（限制），convenience（便利）， effect（影響），appropriately（恰當?shù)兀┘?/span>eyesight（視力）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。