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【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):with delight 高興地 First首先;Second其次;take a walk散步;Look forward to盼望;
Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July,I'm writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing,which I hope will be to your liking.(高分句型一)
First,it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style.(高分句型二)
Second,you can't afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon,where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Simon,
Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July,I'm writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing,which I hope will be to your liking.(高分句型一)
First,it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style.(高分句型二)Second,you can't afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon,where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.(高分句型三)In the evening,it can't be better to take a walk in the Tiananmen Square because it is the largest square in the world and attracts millions of tourists every year.
I hope you'll enjoy an unforgettable experience in Beijing.Look forward to your coming.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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