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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

There used to be a factory near my house. The factory manager was blaming by the government because of the pollution had harmed people’s health. But even then, he paid not attention. Then the factory forced to stop production. The manager said angry, “Is there any fact that we had harmed people’s health yet? In fact, we haven’t.” Just then, a doctor came, with the result of a medical examine, saying the manager was suffering from cancer. This is very clear that the pollution has harmed not only other people’s health and also the manager himself. At last, he realized an importance of keeping the air clean.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.句意：這個工廠的經(jīng)理被政府責(zé)罰。用被動語態(tài)，故把blaming--- blamed。

2. thepollution had harmed people’s health.是一個完整的句子。故去掉of。

3. attention是名詞，故把not---no。

4.句意：那時工廠被迫停產(chǎn)。根據(jù)句意可知用一般過去時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，故在forced前加was。

5.副詞修飾詞，故把angry--- angrily。

6.句意：已經(jīng)有傷害人們健康的事實嗎？根據(jù)句意可知用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，故把had---have。

7.句意：一個醫(yī)學(xué)檢查的結(jié)果。根據(jù)句意可知用名詞形式，故把examine--- exam/examination。

8.句意：很清晰污染不僅傷害了人們的健康，也傷害了經(jīng)理自己的健康。根據(jù)句意可知此處it做形式主語，后面的that從句做真正的主語。故把This---It。

9.固定搭配：not only---but also---不但---而且---。故把and---but。

10.最后他意識到了保持空氣干凈的重要性。此處表示特指，故把an---the.