Question

調(diào)查表明，百分之七十以上的孩子很少或僅僅是偶爾參與戶外活動。專家認(rèn)為，缺乏戶外運動會對學(xué)生乃至成人的身心健康產(chǎn)生不良影響。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動。請你根據(jù)下面所提供的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文。

要點：1. 戶外活動的好處；

2. 戶外活動的方式；

3. 戶外活動需要注意的事項。

注意：1. 短文必須包括以上所有要點，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以保證表達(dá)的連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：120–150詞。開頭已給出，該部分不計入總詞數(shù)；

3. 不得抄襲，所有雷同作文均以零分計；

4. 短文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

A survey suggests that more than 70 percent of children today have little contact with the

natural world, and that this is having a huge impact on their health and development.

Answer 1

One possible version：

A survey suggests that more than 70 percent of children today have little contact with the natural world, and that this is having a huge impact on their health and development. I think it is time for us to take action against this trend and get close to nature.

When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery, but also broaden our horizons and develop new skills.

There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as backpacking, cycling, camping and mountaineering. Visiting farms is also a good way of getting out and about, as they are places where you can enrich your knowledge and enjoy fresh fruits and vegetables. Many people also find that playing sport outdoors is a good way of enjoying the open air while being part of a team.

Whatever you do, though, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be accompanied by parents or friends.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文。本文已經(jīng)給出要點，考生要根據(jù)要點，逐一展開論述。要點包括：戶外活動的好處；戶外活動的方式；戶外活動需要注意的事項。因此文章的條理十分清楚，可按照順序逐一展開話題。文章應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述。寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象，以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并且要達(dá)到要求的字?jǐn)?shù)。此外，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯來提高文章檔次。最后要注意要正確使用連接詞，使文章通順連貫。

【亮點說明】本文最大的亮點是句式的多樣化。文章二段使用了not…only,but…also的句式。文章第三段使用了there be句型，動名詞作主語，定語從句，狀語從句，賓語從句。這些多樣化的句式使文張給人耳目一新的感覺。在以后的作文中，考生要盡量運用多種句式，避免單一，也能給人留下較好的印象。

考點：考查提綱作文