Question

你的同學(xué)劉芳樂于助人(helpful), 積極樂觀(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中幫助了一位受傷的老人。請根據(jù)題示，用英語寫一篇短文向英語報English Times 投稿，簡要敘述她做好事的經(jīng)過, 并談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>

What happened	? an old man seriously hurt in the leg ? what Liu Fang did
Your opinion	? misunderstanding or even trouble, or the right thing? ? …

注意:(1)短文須包括上述全部要點, 應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

(2)詞數(shù):100左右。短文開頭已給出(不計詞數(shù))。

Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

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Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was OK, she left for school.

Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇記敘文，記敘文包括時間、地點、人物、事件，首先敘述做好事的經(jīng)過，將對此好事表明自己的感情提升為要點，更為重要進(jìn)行闡述，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。

考點：提綱作文

點評：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。