Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你的英國筆友Jim發(fā)郵件詢問你這學(xué)期居家學(xué)習的狀況。請給Jim回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你居家期間的主要學(xué)習活動；2.你對居家學(xué)習的感受。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞：居家期間the quarantine period

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear from you. It’s my pleasure to tell you something about my learning activities in the quarantine period.

Because of the COVID-2019, our school arranged for us to study online. During the quarantine period, I studied online on school days. Online learning is not boring but interesting, which is about what we will learn at school. What’s more, I also made a learning plan that is suitable for myself. It’s beneficial for me to make full use of time. In the quarantine period, it may be more comfortable to study at home. But like a coin has two sides, there is a negative aspect to study at home. Students are so confronted with the computers or cellphones all day that the more problems of short-sighted probably arise.

You’re welcome to send e-mails if you have any questions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，要求考生寫一封電子郵件，向朋友介紹居家期間的主要學(xué)習活動和對居家學(xué)習的感受。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式：第一段寫出郵件的目的，引出主題；第二段寫出郵件具體內(nèi)容；第三段再次強調(diào)愿意回答筆友問題。

要求：1. 介紹你居家期間的主要學(xué)習活動

2. 介紹你對居家學(xué)習的感受

第二步:列提綱 （重點單詞及詞組）

be glad to do (很高興做某事); It’s my pleasure to (我很樂意做某事); because of (因為) ; arrange for sb. to do (安排某人去做某事); not…but… (不是……而是……); be suitable for…… (適合……); It’s beneficial for sb. to…(多某人來說做……是有益的); make full use of (充分利用); be confronted with…(面對……); short-sighted (近視的);

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m very glad to hear from you.

2. It’s my pleasure to tell you something about my learning activities in the quarantine period.

3. Because of the COVID-2019, our school arranged for us to study online.

4. Online learning is not boring but interesting.

5. I also made a learning plan that is suitable for myself.

6. It’s beneficial for me to make full use of time.

7. Students are so confronted with the computers or cellphones all day.

8. The more problems of short-sighted probably arise.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1. 表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last

2. 表并列補充關(guān)系：What’s more(本篇文章使用過); besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…

3. 表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…

4. 表因果關(guān)系：because; because of(本篇文章使用過); for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why