Question

【題目】書面表達

近日，我國全面放開二胎政策。就人們關(guān)于二胎政策的看法，你在許多同學(xué)中做了一個調(diào)查。請按以下要點寫一篇調(diào)查報告。

1. 不同的人持不同的觀點。55%左右的人支持，45%左右的人反對。

2. 支持方的理由。

3. 反對方的理由。

4. 你的觀點及理由。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可以適當添加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Recently, two-child policy was put into effect in China

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, two-child policy was put into effect in China，on which I made a survey among a group of students. Their views on it vary from person to person.

About fifty-five percent of the students surveyed hold the view that our country is in urgent need of the new policy. The reasons are chiefly as follows. For one thing, two-child policy contributes to easing pressure from the aging population. For another, it helps to relieve our burden when our parents grow old.

Others are against it. In their eyes, first, it costs too much to bring up two children, which many families can not afford. Second, it will be more difficult to find a job in the future, if there are so many people in China.

As far as I am concerned, I really want to have a little brother. Only in that way, can I learn to share and become less selfish.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于議論文。以當下熱門話題，二胎政策為話題，展開的正反面觀點的討論。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如two-child policy was put into effect in China，on which I made a survey among a group of students為非限定定語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語vary from person to person, in urgent need of等短語。副詞 For another的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。