假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文, 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處, 錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪減或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn), 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

The teacher I loved most was my English teacher at senior high.She was one of those strict teacher but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us.Thus we guys all respected for her.She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to write.She always writes helpful suggestions for writing, organizing and presented better work.She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure, that gave us confidence.She always made us to feel happy in his class.She made big difference to our lives.That’s why I teach now.

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