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3．假設(shè)你是李華．你所居住的城市將于今年8月舉辦一次有外籍人士參加的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，現(xiàn)正招募志愿者．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)給組委會(huì)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，表示希望成為其中一員．
1．個(gè)人情況（性別、年齡、學(xué)歷等）；
2．個(gè)人條件（愛(ài)好體育、英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)好、善于交往、樂(lè)于助人、熟悉本地情況、時(shí)間充裕等）；
3．承諾（如果入選，將會(huì)提供最佳服務(wù)等）．
注意：
1．短文應(yīng)包括所提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．要求書(shū)寫(xiě)清楚，句子通順，語(yǔ)法正確；
3．文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校；
4．字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；信得開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Sports Meet of Fuzhou，which is to take place in August，2016．
I think I am fit for the job．First of all，not only do I have great interest in sports but also I can speak English fluently；in other words，I have no difficulty communicating with others．（高分句型一） At the same time，I always get along well with others and I'm ready to help others，which is of great importance for volunteers．Since the sports meet is going to be held during the summer vacation，I will have enough time to do the job．（高分句型二）Above all，I am very familiar with the city，because I have been living here for 16 years．（高分句型三） If I become a volunteer，I will offer the best service． 
I am looking forward to your reply．Thank you．

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)題目已給的提示，作文可按照以下思路來(lái)寫(xiě)：
1．文章分為三部分．第一部分寫(xiě)自己寫(xiě)信的目的，自己的基本情況：性別、年齡、學(xué)歷等．
第二部分寫(xiě)自己能成為志愿者的條件：愛(ài)好體育、英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)好、善于交往、樂(lè)于助人、熟悉本地情況、時(shí)間充裕等．
第三部分表明自己的決心/承諾：如果入選，將會(huì)提供最佳服務(wù)等．
2．文章的時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．適當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句，注意連詞的正確使用，同時(shí)還要保證主謂一致，人稱代詞上下文一致等問(wèn)題．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be fit for適合；First of all首先；not only，but also不僅，而且；in other words換句話說(shuō)；At the same time同時(shí)；Above all最重要的是；
First of all，not only do I have great interest in sports but also I can speak English fluently；in other words，I have no difficulty communicating with others．（高分句型一）
Since the sports meet is going to be held during the summer vacation，I will have enough time to do the job．（高分句型二）
Above all，I am very familiar with the city，because I have been living here for 16 years．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Sports Meet of Fuzhou，which is to take place in August，2016．   
       I think I am fit for the job．First of all，not only do I have great interest in sports but also I can speak English fluently；in other words，I have no difficulty communicating with others．（高分句型一） At the same time，I always get along well with others and I'm ready to help others，which is of great importance for volunteers．Since the sports meet is going to be held during the summer vacation，I will have enough time to do the job．（高分句型二）Above all，I am very familiar with the city，because I have been living here for 16 years．（高分句型三） If I become a volunteer，I will offer the best service．
       I am looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．