13．假如你是李華，計(jì)劃高考結(jié)束之后開(kāi)始健身，鍛煉身體．請(qǐng)給你在美國(guó)的健身達(dá)人朋友Jack寫(xiě)一個(gè)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
①你對(duì)健身的識(shí)
②你的計(jì)劃
③咨詢(xún)他的建議
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Jack，
How is everything going？Time flies!In a few days．I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time．（高分句型一）Going to the gym to improve my fitness is one on my list．Considering that you are an expert in this area，I'm writing to ask you for some advice．（高分句型二）
Honestly，I'm afraid that the one-year rush on study has overused my body．It is vital for me to rebuild it after the exam．As it is planned，I will go to the gym every evening，running on a machine for around half an hour．（高分句型三）Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged，which will last for another 30 minutes．（高分句型四）
What do you think of my plan？I'll appreciate it if you could give me some of your advice or correct anything unsuitable in my plan．
Looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，計(jì)劃高考結(jié)束之后開(kāi)始健身，鍛煉身體．請(qǐng)給你在美國(guó)的健身達(dá)人朋友Jack寫(xiě)一個(gè)郵件，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：①你對(duì)健身的識(shí)②你的計(jì)劃③咨詢(xún)他的建議2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Time flies!時(shí)光飛逝；get over度過(guò)；be dying to do渴望做某事；Considering 考慮到，鑒于；Honestly誠(chéng)實(shí)的說(shuō)；Look forward to盼望；
I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time．（高分句型一）
Considering that you are an expert in this area，I'm writing to ask you for some advice．（高分句型二）
As it is planned，I will go to the gym every evening，running on a machine for around half an hour．（高分句型三）
Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged，which will last for another 30 minutes．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Jack，
       How is everything going？Time flies!In a few days．I will finally get over Gaokao and be available to do something I have been dying to for a long time．（高分句型一）Going to the gym to improve my fitness is one on my list．Considering that you are an expert in this area，I'm writing to ask you for some advice．（高分句型二）
       Honestly，I'm afraid that the one-year rush on study has overused my body．It is vital for me to rebuild it after the exam．As it is planned，I will go to the gym every evening，running on a machine for around half an hour．（高分句型三）Then some workout related to fitness equipment will be arranged，which will last for another 30 minutes．（高分句型四）
      What do you think of my plan？I'll appreciate it if you could give me some of your advice or correct anything unsuitable in my plan．
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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