Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文 中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或 修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞.

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Longjing tea, it has topped the list of the ten most famous teas in China with its color, taste and shape? is named after its production region-Longjing Village of West Lake.

Thanks for Emperor Qianlong of the Qing Dynasty, the tea has earned a high reputation. The story went that Emperor Qianlong was visited the mountain during his Hangzhou travels, and he saw some ladies picking the tea at the foot of the mountain. He was very interested in their movements that he decided to have a go himself. While picked the tea, he received the news of his mother's illness, so he carelessly puts the leaves in his sleeve and left Hangzhou for Beijing. He visited his mother immediately upon his arrival in Beijing. His mother smelt the fragrance of the tea leaves from his sleeves and wanted to have a taste. After drinking a cup of tea, she found herself completely refreshing, and she even praised it as cure for all illnesses. From now on, the tea was listed as the tribute tea(貢茶).

Answer 1

【答案】it →which

for →to

去掉was

very →so

picked →picking

puts →put

sleeves →sleeve

refreshing →refreshed

as后面加上a

now →then

【解析】

本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。文章介紹了中國(guó)龍井茶，以及龍井茶與乾隆帝的故事。

1.考查非限性定語(yǔ)從句。句意：因其色、味和形位列中國(guó)十大名茶之首的龍井茶以產(chǎn)地—龍井村命名。分析句子可知此處應(yīng)為非限性定語(yǔ)從句修飾Longjing tea，且從句中缺主語(yǔ)，因此用which。故it 改為which。

2.考查介詞。句意：多虧了乾隆帝，龍井茶獲得了很高的名聲。thanks to多虧了，需把for改成to。故for 改為to。

3.考查主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。句意：乾隆帝在杭州游覽時(shí)拜訪(fǎng)了這座山。根據(jù)句意可知此處需用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。故去掉was。

4. 考查固定句式。句意：他對(duì)她們的動(dòng)作如此感興趣以至于他自己要試一試。根據(jù)句意可知此處考查句式so...that“如此……以至于”。故very改為so。

5. 考查現(xiàn)在分詞作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。句意：當(dāng)他正在采茶的時(shí)候，他收到了母親去世的消息，因此，他隨意地把茶樹(shù)的葉子放進(jìn)一只袖子里，然后離開(kāi)杭州。pick與邏輯主語(yǔ)Emperor Qianlong構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，需用主動(dòng)形式，故應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞picking。故picked 改為picking。

6. 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。句意：當(dāng)他正在采茶的時(shí)候，他收到了母親得病的消息，因此，他隨意地把茶樹(shù)的葉子放進(jìn)一只袖子里，然后離開(kāi)杭州。根據(jù)其后的and left，可知此處需用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故puts 改為put。

7. 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：他的母親聞到了那只袖子里的茶葉發(fā)出的香味，并想品嘗一下。根據(jù)上文，可知當(dāng)年乾隆只是把少量茶葉放在一只袖子里，故應(yīng)用名詞單數(shù)sleeve。故sleeves 改為sleeve。

8.考查過(guò)去分詞作賓補(bǔ)。句意：喝了一杯茶后，她感到自己精神抖擻，她甚至稱(chēng)贊它為一種包治百病的療法。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處為find的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，此結(jié)構(gòu)中的賓補(bǔ)用來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明賓語(yǔ)herself，故應(yīng)用refreshed“（感到）神清氣爽的”；refreshing“使人精神振奮的”，常用來(lái)修飾物，例如：refreshing drinks。故refreshing改為refreshed。

9. 考查冠詞。句意：喝了一杯茶后，她感到自己精神抖擻，她甚至稱(chēng)贊它為一種包治百病的療法。根據(jù)語(yǔ)意，此處意為“一種治療辦法”，因此應(yīng)用不定冠詞。故as后面加上a。

10. 考查固定搭配。句意：從那時(shí)起，龍井茶就位列貢茶行列。from then on從那時(shí)起。故now 改為then。