Question

【題目】假定你是李華，暑假在澳大利亞悉尼歌劇院參觀時結(jié)識了當(dāng)?shù)厍嗄?/span>Jack,參觀過程中他為 你提供了很多幫助。在你即將回國之際，給他寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.感謝他的幫助；2.你的收獲與祝福。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：悉尼歌劇院Sydney Opera House

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am writing to deliver my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help during my visit at the Sydney Opera House. I appreciate your guidance and the time you spent accompanying me.

I can still remember that I was at a loss what to do next. Then it was you who offered me valuable advice on how to explore it. With my invitation, you even gladly agreed to accompany me there. In the following hours, we had so much fun. Your point of view gave me a new prospective and I gained valuable insights, which made me have a better knowledge of the opera house.

Thank you again. If I may be of help to you, please let me know. Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對Jack的感謝。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)主要為一般過去時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表明寫信目的

2.表達(dá)感謝及收獲

1）表達(dá)感謝。（appreciation）

2）收獲與祝福。（gains and wishes）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

deliver; appreciate; be at a loss; valuable advice; agree to do; a new prospective; If

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am writing to deliver my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help during my visit at the Sydney Opera House.

2. I appreciate your guidance and the time you spent accompanying me.

3. I can still remember that I was at a loss what to do next.

4. Then it was you who offered me valuable advice on how to explore it.

5. you even gladly agreed to accompany me there.

6. Your point of view gave me a new prospective

7. If I may be of help to you, please let me know.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改