Question

18．隨著髙考臨近，某英語報社向學生征集給父母的一封信．假如你是某校髙三學生李華，準 備應報社之征給自己父母寫一封信．信的要點包括：
1．感謝父母的關心和幫助；
2．向父母訴說兩件心事*
3．根據(jù)心事向父母提出兩個請求． 注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右》
2．文中不得提及真實人名、校名及地名；
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出．（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Dad and Mom，
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner，I feel both excited and sressed．There are lots of words I'd like to share with you two．
I'm always thankful to you for your making great efforts to take care of me unselfishly．Now I have two things in my mind that worry me a lot．One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively．As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons．Another requirement is to tell me how to deal with the relationship between boys and girls properly so that I can focus my energy on my studies．Thank you．
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively．本句是一個復雜句，其中and連接了兩個并列句"One is that…and the other is that"，兩句都是that引導的表語從句，在第一個表語從句中用了英語的固定句型"have difficulty in doing sth"做某事有困難；這里which引導的是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代的是前面整個句子的意思．
高分句型二：As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons．因此我希望你們兩個能夠鼓勵我在數(shù)學課上能克服困難．其中both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons是賓語從句．

解答 Dear Dad and Mom，
     With the College Entrance Examination around the corner，I feel both excited and sressed．There are lots of words I'd like to share with you two．
     I'm always thankful to you for your making great efforts to take care of me unselfishly．Now I have two things in my mind that worry me a lot．One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively（句型一）．【向父母闡明心事】As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons（句型二）．Another requirement is to tell me how to deal with the relationship between boys and girls properly so that I can focus my energy on my studies．Thank you．【向父母提出請求】
  Best wishes!
  Yours
  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．