Question

17．目前，越來越多的家長花巨資送孩子出國學(xué)習(xí)，且呈低齡化趨勢．部分教育工作者和家長并不贊成這一做法．某英語報(bào)社就這一問題做了調(diào)查，并開設(shè)了專欄討論．請你 根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿．

	贊成者38%	反對者62%
原因	接受良好的教育，學(xué)好外語將來賺大錢	花錢太多，是在國內(nèi)學(xué)習(xí)的10多倍；孩子小，在陌生的環(huán)境中容易學(xué)壞．

注意：
（1）提示：政府應(yīng)該采取措施建立各類學(xué)校以滿足人們的需要；
（2）詞數(shù)：100左右
Now more and more parents are sending their children overseas for further study，even at middle school age．
                                                                           

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息越來越多的家長花巨資送孩子出國學(xué)習(xí)，且呈低齡化趨勢．部分教育工作者和家長并不贊成這一做法．某英語報(bào)社就這一問題做了調(diào)查，并開設(shè)了專欄討論．請你 根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和原因兩個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：agree to同意；depend on依靠，依賴；broaden their horizons拓展視野；However然而；in favor of支持；Besides另外；take care of照顧；What's more而且；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；meet the needs of the people滿足人們的需求
They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well．（高分句型一）
What is the most valuable is to learn to depend on themselves and to broaden their horizons and improve their understanding of the world．（高分句型二）
However，over 62% of the people，especially some educationists and parents，are not in favor of this，for they think studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as in China．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people．（高分句型四）

解答 Nowadays more and more people are sending their children overseas for further study，even at middle school age.38% of the people investigated agreed to this．They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well．（高分句型一）And they have more golden opportunities to develop themselves．What is the most valuable is to learn to depend on themselves and to broaden their horizons and improve their understanding of the world．（高分句型二）
       However，over 62% of the people，especially some educationists and parents，are not in favor of this，for they think studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as in China．（高分句型三） Besides，children are too young to take care of themselves．Many parents worry about the safety of their children．What's more，they might follow bad examples．
       In my opinion，measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people．（高分句型四）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．