Question

【題目】感恩，是我們生活中永恒的話題。學會感恩，學會熱愛生活，我們將會感受到更多快樂。假如你校擬舉行一次有關“感恩”的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇英語講演稿。

要點：

1．感恩對象（父母、老師、朋友…）； 2．為何感恩； 3．如何感恩。

注意：

1．只能選擇一個感恩對象；2．可對所給要點作適當發(fā)揮；

3．講演稿中不得提及考生所在的學校或本人姓名；

4．詞數(shù)120左右，開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is "Thank you, _____________ ."

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone! It's great hoot to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is "Thank you, mum."

Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during there stressful days. In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I'm fortunate to have such a caring mother.

Listen, time is clacking. The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughter, to realize dreams. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mums. I have another message for everyone here: Express your love in return. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her will shine her through.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是要求學生寫“感恩”為話題的演講稿，是一篇典型的提綱作文，在寫作之前要注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如be blessed with，keep sb. company，as … as possible，on top of that, cheer up，be fortunate to do，realize dreams， appeal to，light up；還運用高級詞匯appreciate，unconditional等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：whenever等等。