【題目】假如你是李華。來自澳大利亞的交換生Kenton首次離家來中國讀書，因生活上和語言交流上有困難，他萌生了回家的念頭。不知如何是好的他在某網(wǎng)站上發(fā)帖求助，請你據(jù)此給他回帖。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Kenton,

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I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Kenton,

I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but I am willing to help you out of the trouble.

To tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home. But personally, I don’t think we can live with our parents all the life. Thus, it is a good chance for you to be more independent. You can call your parents more often instead of giving up your study.

If you don’t mind, I would like to be your friend. We can chat online frequently, which will improve your Chinese a lot. Only by communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】首先審題，這篇文章要求假如你是李華。來自澳大利亞的交換生Kenton首次離家來中國讀書，因生活上和語言交流上有困難，他萌生了回家的念頭。不知如何是好的他在某網(wǎng)站上發(fā)帖求助，請你據(jù)此給他回帖。其次選用正確的人稱和時態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時、第二人稱來寫。然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意:大體分三個段落來寫，第一自然段說明自己愿意幫助他解決問題；第二自然段提出具體的解決方案并表示自己愿意和他交朋友；第三自然段期待他的答復(fù)。文中給出的細(xì)節(jié)都要包括，不要遺漏。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: be willing to愿意，To tell you the truth說實(shí)話。還使用了賓語從句I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but I am willing to help you out of the trouble.和主語從句To tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home.提升了文章的整體水平。

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