Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你所居住的城市就要開始垃圾分類了，你們社區(qū)準(zhǔn)備進行一次垃圾分類的公益活動，請你寫一則英文通知，希望有外國友人能參與其中。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 活動的時間和地點；

2. 參加人員需要做的工作；

3. 報名地點和截止時間。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：garbage classification垃圾分類

Notice

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Yingze Community Office

Answer 1

【答案】Notice

There will be a non-profit campaign focusing on garbage classification launched in the garden of our community from 9 to 11 this Sunday morning. Now some foreign volunteers are terribly wanted.

On that day what volunteers need to do is hand out the leaflets prepared in advance to the inhabitants in the neighborhood, spreading some relevant knowledge. What’s more, volunteers are expected to explain to those, especially foreigners, who have puzzles on how to classify different wastes in our life. And some interesting games may make the atmosphere more lively.

Any foreign friend who has interest in this meaningful activity is welcome to sign up in the office of our community before Thursday. Looking forward to your taking part!

Yingze Community Office

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇通知。希望有外國友人能參與社區(qū)垃圾分類的公益活動。

第一步：審題：

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主

人稱：第三人稱

要點：1. 活動的時間和地點；2. 參加人員需要做的工作；3. 報名地點和截止時間

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式作文：第一段介紹活動及舉辦的時間、地點；第二段介紹了參加人員當(dāng)天需要做的工作；第三段表示歡迎外國友人的參與以及報名地點和截止時間。

第二步：關(guān)鍵詞（組）

there will be；non-profit；campaign；focus on；garbage classification；community；volunteers；hand out；in advance；inhabitants；relevant knowledge；be expected to do sth.；classify；wastes；has interest in；meaningful；be welcome to；sign up；look forward to；take part等

第三步：連詞成句：

1. There will be a non-profit campaign focusing on garbage classification launched in the garden of our community from 9 to 11 this Sunday morning.

2. On that day what volunteers need to do is hand out the leaflets prepared in advance to the inhabitants in the neighborhood, spreading some relevant knowledge.

3. Volunteers are expected to explain to those, especially foreigners, who have puzzles on how to classify different wastes in our life.

4. Some interesting games may make the atmosphere more lively

5. Any foreign friend who has interest in this meaningful activity is welcome to sign up in the office of our community before Thursday.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：關(guān)聯(lián)詞（組）：

What’s more；And等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改