Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意： 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

After the Spring Festival, there arises some hot topics, and lucky money is including as well. To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has made these days.

82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the more attractive part for children, it forms the good memory of our childhood.

The rest, however, think bad of it. For one thing, the amount is grown bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe (賄賂) people in the power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.

Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its meaning can you send our hearty wishes to the young.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】arises→arise

【2】including→included

【3】has后加been

【4】custom→customs

【5】more→most

【6】it→which

【7】bad→badly

【8】grown→growing

【9】the去掉

【10】you→we

【解析】

試題分析：通過(guò)修改作文方式的短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，形容詞副詞等的掌握。

【1】arises→arise 考查there be句型。該句為there be句型，be動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)取決于緊隨其后的名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，由hot topics可知，這里動(dòng)詞需用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【2】including→included 考查過(guò)去分詞。be included“包括”，這里指的是錢(qián)也包括在內(nèi)，所以需用過(guò)去分詞。

【3】has后加been 考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。Online survey與make之間應(yīng)該是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以這里需在has后加been。

【4】custom→customs 考查名詞。One of后加名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以這里需用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【5】more→most 考查最高級(jí)。這里指的是最吸引人的一部分，所以應(yīng)該用most。

【6】it→which 考查定語(yǔ)從句。因與前面一句沒(méi)有連詞連接，且中間是句號(hào)，故該句為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為前面一句話(huà)的內(nèi)容，所以這里需將it改為which。

【7】bad→badly 考查短語(yǔ)。修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞，所以這里需將bad改為badly。

【8】grown→growing 考查現(xiàn)在分詞。這里指的是長(zhǎng)的越來(lái)越大，所以該句需用進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，將grown改為growing。

【9】the去掉 考查短語(yǔ)。in power為固定短語(yǔ)，意為“執(zhí)政的，掌權(quán)的”，所以這里需將the去掉。

【10】you→we 考查代詞。這里指的是我們給年輕人祝福，所以需將you改為we。