Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

“If mum finds out that I'm going to the beach, I'll be in big trouble.” I said to myself softly in a low voice.

I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going?” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running towards the bus stop at top speed,

After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes (獨木舟). After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk (游泳褲). For about an hour, we played volleyball happily.

Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for them.

I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put in

an extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the ball further away from me. At that moment, a string of weed （海草）tangled (纏繞) up with my feet and I could not swim properly.

I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,” I thought silently.

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Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater.

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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1

Finally, after struggling For a minute or two, I still got putted underwater. I told myself I should never give up. Then I pulled the weed again with great efforts. The weed finally broke. I swam back to the surface to take a deep breath. I saw two young men in canoes, racing each other. I was exhausted and shouted for help. The two men saw me and raced towards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already unconscious.

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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital. Jimmy and Bobby told me the two young men brought me to the shore and sent me to the hospital. After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in. My parents scolded me for running out of the house secretly but were also glad that I was not seriously injured. I will never forget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want to show off again.

【解析】

前文提要：我掙扎著保持漂浮，但沒有用。“如果我聽了我父母的話，這是永遠不會發(fā)生的，”我默默地想。

（1）第一段所給首句：Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater.這是一句轉(zhuǎn)折句，接下來應(yīng)該是作者不放棄，勇敢地游出水面，求救，無論從何角度拓展，需注意與續(xù)寫第二段首句呼應(yīng)。

（2）第二段首句：When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.這一句應(yīng)該是轉(zhuǎn)折句，既然作者醒來，說明他已經(jīng)被救，接下來應(yīng)該是作者躺在醫(yī)院里，一定是通知了他的家人，父母來后一定會生氣的，父母會責(zé)備他偷偷地跑出了房子，但也很高興他沒有受到嚴(yán)重的傷害。作者永遠不會忘記那可怕的經(jīng)歷。他也不想再炫耀了。