Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

The little boy

A little boy selling magazines for school walked up to a house that people rarely visited. The house was very old and shabby and the owner hardly ever came out. When he did come out, he would not say hello to his neighbors or passers-by but simply just glare at them.

The boy knocked on the door and waited, sweating from fear of the old man. The boy’s parents told him to stay away from the house, and a lot of the other neighborhood children were told the same thing from their parents.

Dust found the boy lingering on and hesitating what to do. As he was ready to walk away, the door slowly opened. “What do you want?” the old man said impatiently. The little boy was very afraid but he had a quota(份額) to meet for school with selling the magazines. So he got up the courage and said, “Uh, sir, I am selling these magazines and uh, I was wondering if you would like to buy one from me.”

The old man just stared at the boy without a word. The boy could see inside the old man’s house and saw that he had dog figurines(小雕像) on the fireplace mantle. “Do you collect dogs?” The little boy asked. “Yes, I have many collections in my house. They are my family here and they are all I have.” The boy then felt sorry for the man, as it seemed that he was a very lonely soul.

“Well, I do have a magazine here for collectors. It is perfect for you. I also have one about dogs since you like dogs so much.” The old man was ready to close the door on the boy and said, “No, boy. I don’t need any magazines of any kind, now goodbye.”

The little boy was sad that he was not going to make his quota with the sale. He was also sad for the old man being so alone in the house that he owned. The boy went home and then had an idea. He had a little dog figurine that he got some years ago from an aunt. The figurine did not mean nearly as much to him since he had a real live dog and a large family.

Para 1:

The little boy headed back down to the old man’s house.

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Para 2:

From that day on something changed inside the old man.

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Answer 1

【答案】參考范文1：

The boy headed back down to the old man’s house. The thought of knocking at the old man’s door filled the little boy with fear, though, he still knocked on the door, waiting breathlessly. Finally, it opened, and out came the old man. Seeing the boy holding a well-wrapped dog figurine, he looked very astonished but still glared at him without a word. Determined to break the ice, the boy gave the old man the gift with a precious card attached, expressing his care. Deeply moved by all the boy did, the old man could say nothing but to hug him tightly, the tears of appreciation welling up. Out of gratitude, he bought a magazine from the boy and saw him off.

From that day on something changed inside the old man. He adopted a real live dog and treated him as his child. It seemed that it was the company of the dog that led the lonely soul out of darkness and loneliness. Gradually, he was willing to greet others and wear a bright smile, expressing his appreciation to life. Indeed, only when we open up the door of our heart, can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love and care.

參考范文2：

The boy headed back down to the old man’s house. The dog figurine witnessed the little boy’s ending up opening the door once more. Upon seeing the boy for a second time, the old man couldn’t bring his anger under control any longer. “Haven’t I told you I need no magazines at all?” He snapped at the boy. “Yes, sir.” said the little boy with an uneasy expression on his face, “But I think you will like the figurine.” Then he handed it to the old man. Taking the figurine from the boy’s hands, the lonely soul was so astonished that words failed to convey his emotions, tears welling up in his eyes. “Thank you so much!” he said to the boy tenderly.

From that day on something changed inside the old man. The neighborhood always found the old man hanging out and smiling at everyone. He showed his precious collections to children who were now very willing to play with him. He used to collect figurines in memory of a real live dog which had kept company with him for a long time before it died. But now, he wasn’t drowned in the sorrows and loneliness anymore. He had realized the true spirit of life!

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，文章講述了一個(gè)小男孩向一位孤獨(dú)的老人賣雜志，老人拒絕了，男孩看到老人收集的小狗雕像，就送給老人自己的雕像，溫暖了老人孤獨(dú)的內(nèi)心的故事。

（參考范文1）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：The boy headed back down to the old man’s house. ( 男孩朝老人的房子走去。)結(jié)合前文線索“The boy went home and then had an idea. He had a little dog figurine that he got some years ago from an aunt.”可知，小男孩有一個(gè)幾年前從姑媽那里得到的小狗雕像，本段應(yīng)該續(xù)寫這個(gè)小男孩帶著小狗雕像去送給這位孤獨(dú)的老人，描寫老人因小男孩的舉動(dòng)而觸動(dòng)內(nèi)心，改變了對(duì)他的態(tài)度，比如因感動(dòng)而買下了小男孩的雜志等；第二段開頭是From that day on something changed inside the old man.( 從那天起，老人的內(nèi)心發(fā)生了變化。) ，因此本段應(yīng)該寫老人的變化，比如與前文提及內(nèi)容“When he did come out, he would not say hello to his neighbors or passers-by but simply just glare at them.( 當(dāng)他出來(lái)的時(shí)候，他不會(huì)和鄰居或路人打招呼，只是怒目而視。)”不同，他開始與人交流，有了真正的寵物狗作伴，老人不再孤獨(dú)等，從而升華文章主旨：敞開心扉才能沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，感受人間溫暖和關(guān)愛(ài)。

（參考范文2）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：The boy headed back down to the old man’s house. ( 男孩朝老人的房子走去。)，結(jié)合前文伏筆“The boy went home and then had an idea. He had a little dog figurine that he got some years ago from an aunt.”可知，小男孩有一個(gè)幾年前從姑媽那里得到的小狗雕像，本段應(yīng)該續(xù)寫這個(gè)小男孩帶著小狗雕像去送給這位孤獨(dú)的老人時(shí)，與老人之間的交流對(duì)話，主要圍繞老人對(duì)此的反應(yīng)展開描寫，比如從剛開始的態(tài)度已然強(qiáng)硬拒絕到后來(lái)看到小狗雕像時(shí)的感動(dòng)等；第二段開頭是From that day on something changed inside the old man.( 從那天起，老人的內(nèi)心發(fā)生了變化。) ，因此本段主要圍繞“老人的變化”而展開描寫，比如經(jīng)常出門，與小男孩甚至與其他孩子成為朋友，從而講述他不再因過(guò)去而悲傷，重新振作生活。

注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右，按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。