3.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Manners are important to happy relations among people.No one liked a person with bad manners.Having good manners is seen by many people for a sign of cultural understanding and good taste.Polite words are one of the example.When meet people,saying"Hello!"or"How are you?"and so on means you are very polite,which will make that easy for you to communicate with others.However,other people will hate getting on with you and your life will become difficulty.Only saying polite words can you get on well with others.
    All in the all,it is polite words which will make your life become convenient.

分析 文章講述了禮貌在人際交往中的重要作用.說話有禮貌讓你與人交往時(shí)更受歡迎,也能給你的生活帶來好處.

解答 Manners are important to happy relations among people.No one liked a person with bad manners.Having good manners is seen by many people for a sign of cultural understanding and good taste.Polite words are one of the example.When meet people,saying"Hello!"or"How are you?"and so on means you are very polite,which will make that easy for you to communicate with others.However,other people will hate getting on with you and your life will become difficulty.Only∧saying polite words can you get on well with others.
    All in the all,it is polite words which will make your life become convenient.
詳解:
1.liked改為likes;時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤.根據(jù)語境應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),主語是no one,謂語動(dòng)詞要用三單形式.
2.for改為as;短語搭配錯(cuò)誤.for是"為了,因?yàn)?;as"作為",根據(jù)語境see…as…"把…看作"應(yīng)用as.
3.example改為examples;名詞錯(cuò)誤.根據(jù)短語one of the+名詞復(fù)數(shù),…中之一.
4.meet改為meeting;句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤.此處是when與現(xiàn)在分詞連用作時(shí)間狀語,省略了相同的主語和系動(dòng)詞,相當(dāng)于when you are meeting people.
5.that改為it;代詞錯(cuò)誤.根據(jù)句型"make it+形容詞+不定式"可以知道it作形式賓語,真正的賓語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式.
6.However改為Otherwise;副詞錯(cuò)誤.根據(jù)語意應(yīng)用"否則",且句中有逗號(hào)分隔,要用副詞otherwise來表示.
7.difficulty改為difficult;形容詞錯(cuò)誤.根據(jù)become后跟形容詞作表語.
8.加by;句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤."by+動(dòng)詞-ing形式"作句子的方式狀語.
9.the去掉;短語搭配錯(cuò)誤.固定短語all in all"總而言之".
10.which改為that;句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型結(jié)構(gòu)"It is+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+…".

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí).常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有:名詞(單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤),動(dòng)詞(時(shí)態(tài),語態(tài),搭配,轉(zhuǎn)換),代詞(指代錯(cuò)誤),形容詞和副詞(轉(zhuǎn)換,比較等級(jí)),連詞(and,but,or)等.偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤,如本來用her,卻用了his等等.解題是要注意:以句子為單位,以動(dòng)詞為中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤;找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主,動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分.

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