8.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文.作文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞.刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞.
    注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞.2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Mr.Hill was a chicken farmer whose had hundreds of chickens.He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money,so the house he lived in was hot and uncomfortable.He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in summer,and then he decided to put his air conditioner(空調(diào)) into his chicken house so that his hens could lay well all through year.The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day.When he saw Mr.Hill's house,he thought that he might be able to persuading him to buy for an air conditioner."Your wife would be more happier and more comfortable then."he said to Mr.Hill.But Mr.Hill was not interesting."My wife didn't lay eggs."Mr.Hill said.

分析 本文講述的是一則笑話;養(yǎng)雞場(chǎng)的場(chǎng)主Mr.Hill養(yǎng)了許多雞,靠賣雞蛋也賺了不少的錢,但他住的房子卻又熱又不舒服;因?yàn)樗l(fā)現(xiàn)雞在夏天幾乎不下蛋,于是就把他用的空調(diào)按在了雞舍里;空調(diào)公司的老板發(fā)現(xiàn)Mr.Hill住的房子里沒(méi)有空調(diào),便想勸他給自己的妻子買一臺(tái)空調(diào),Mr.Hill卻不樂(lè)意地說(shuō):"我妻子又不下蛋."

解答 Mr.Hill was a chicken farmer whose had hundreds of chickens.He
sold eggs and got quite a lot of money,so the house he lived in was
hot and uncomfortable.He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in summer,
and then he decided to put his air conditioner(空調(diào)) into his chicken house
so that his hens could lay well all through∧year.The boss of the air conditioning
company came to see herone day.When he saw Mr.Hill's house,he thought
that he might be able to persuading him to buyfor an air conditioner."Your wife
would bemore happier and more comfortable then."he said to Mr.Hill.But Mr.
Hill was notinteresting."My wifedidn'tlay eggs."Mr.Hill said.
詳解:
1.whose改為who    考查關(guān)系代詞     本句為定語(yǔ)從句;關(guān)系代詞whose通常在該從句中作定語(yǔ);而由于此處的先行詞a chicken farmer (指人),在從句中作的是主語(yǔ),故用關(guān)系代詞who.
2.so改為but   考查句意理解以及連詞   本句的意思是:他賣雞蛋,并且賺了不少錢,但他住的房子卻又熱又不舒服;此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折,并非因果關(guān)系;故用but.
3.hen改為hens   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)    根據(jù)上文提到:養(yǎng)雞場(chǎng)的場(chǎng)主Mr.Hill有成千上百只雞,賣雞蛋,賺了許多錢,可知此處指的應(yīng)是許多母雞;故用復(fù)數(shù)名詞hens.
4.year前加the    考查固定短語(yǔ)     all through the year意為:全年;故在year前加the.
5.her改為him    考查人稱代詞的一致性   此處在句中作賓語(yǔ),根據(jù)下文空調(diào)公司的老板勸Mr.Hill 給自己的妻子買空調(diào)可知;這里指的應(yīng)是Mr.Hill;故用him.
6.persuading改為persuade    考查動(dòng)詞的形式    此處用在固定短語(yǔ)be able to之后,應(yīng)使用動(dòng)詞原形;故用persuade.
7.去掉an之后的for    考查及物動(dòng)詞   由于buy是及物動(dòng)詞,其后跟賓語(yǔ)時(shí),不能加介詞;故去掉an之后的for.
8.去掉be之后的more或?qū)ore改為much    考查形容詞的比較級(jí)/副詞     由于比較級(jí)(more)不能用來(lái)修飾比較級(jí)(happier),但副詞much可以用來(lái)修飾比較級(jí);故去掉be之后的more或用much.   
9.interesting改為interested   考查過(guò)去分詞    此處在句中作表語(yǔ),說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)Mr.Hill (指人)的情況;故用interested.
10.didn't改為doesn't    考查時(shí)態(tài)   此處用在直接引語(yǔ)中,說(shuō)明的是Mr.Hill 的妻子當(dāng)時(shí)的情況,應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);故用doesn't.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題,主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力.錯(cuò)誤類型一般有:缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞.常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤有:1 詞法錯(cuò)誤,主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此類試題時(shí),需要正確分析句子成分,熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常見(jiàn)句法錯(cuò)誤.通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問(wèn)句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤.解答此類試題時(shí),需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法.3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下,進(jìn)行作答.

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