【題目】假如你是李華，下圖描述的是你這個周六的活動，請你就此寫一篇英語日記。

要求：1. 包括所有的要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2. 字數(shù)：120詞左右。

Morning: cycle to raise money for disaster – hit areas

Afternoon: watch the film of Jiao Yulu

Evening: read The Diary of a Young Girl

December 27th Saturday Sunny

What a wonderful weekend！

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【答案】December 27th Saturday Sunny

What a wonderful weekend！

Today is Saturday. My friends Li Ming and I joined a team of cyclists along our city with the hope of raising money to help children in disaster-hit areas. Although tired, we were having a good time and collected about 5 thousand Yuan to give to the schools. In the afternoon, we went to see a film named Jiao Yulu. I was so moved by the hero in the film that I made up my mind to study harder in order to serve for the people better in the future. As usual, I spent about two hours reading The Diary of a Young Girl. The experience of the character attracted me much. “What a wonderful weekend!” I thought when I went to bed at 10 o’clock.

【解析】1.確定文章的體裁，本題所要求寫的書面表達是日記，那么首先就需要知曉日記的寫作特點。

2.確定文章時態(tài)的基調(diào)，確定文章時態(tài)的基調(diào)對于整個寫作非常重要。它直接決定了不同句子使用的時態(tài)正確與否。這篇日記介紹當天發(fā)生過的事，應該以一般過去時為主。

3.仔細閱讀題目要求和文字提示，領會要寫的文章的主題，確定文章的段落，寫出各段的主題句。本題應該按照時間順序Morning: cycle to raise money for disaster – hit areas；Afternoon: watch the film of Jiao Yulu；Evening: read The Diary of a Young Girl。這樣確定文章的基本結構。

4.嘗試用高級詞匯，使可讀性增強。美化句子可以采用復合句和特殊的句型結構，也可以采用形式主語、形式賓語或簡略句來實現(xiàn)。如：As usual，I spent about two hours reading The Diary of a Young Girl.

長難句解析：

Although tired, we were having a good time and collected about 5 thousand Yuan to give to the schools.

although引導讓步狀語從句，此處是一個省略的從句，完整的從句應該是Although we were tired.主句由and連接were having和collected兩個謂語。

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