【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中

共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn),并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分

Dear Mr. Dyson,

I am interested in what you advertised the other day on the Internet. I would like to apply to become a assistant in your company.

I expect to graduate on Beijing University in 2019 and get a Master's degree in mechanical engineering. In the past few years, I had got experience in designing new projects and developed professionally competence in my subjects.

I worked in my holidays for a company where designed engines for jeeps. I helped them design several part of the new engine. It made me to think I would like to work in a real inventor's company. I understand that you have the qualifications and experience that you need for the personnel in your company. I would grateful if you could consider employ me in your company.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Xue

【答案】

【解析】

本文為申請(qǐng)信，主要介紹了自己的受教育情況，工作經(jīng)歷等。

第一處為冠詞錯(cuò)誤，assistant 為元音開(kāi)頭，因此用an， 不用a。

第二處為介詞錯(cuò)誤，畢業(yè)于用graduate from。

第三處為時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。In the past few years，提示時(shí)態(tài)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。

第四處為形容詞錯(cuò)誤。修飾competence 這個(gè)名詞用形容詞professional，而不用副詞。

第五處為定用從句連詞的錯(cuò)誤。Company 為先行詞，從句缺少主語(yǔ)，所以用關(guān)系代詞that/which。

第六處為名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。前面有several修飾，所以用parts。

第七處為不定式錯(cuò)誤。Make sb do sth，不能加to。

第八處為代詞錯(cuò)誤。我認(rèn)為我有資格和經(jīng)驗(yàn)。所以you 要改為I。

第九處為謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤。我將充滿(mǎn)感激，would 后加be +形容詞，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，作謂語(yǔ)。

第十處為非謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤。Consider +doing.表示考慮干某事。

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