Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面材枓，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Bike-sharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market. The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months. The bike-sharing companies operate in a similar way. They use apps that allow users, after paying a deposit, to unlock the wheels with their smartphones. After the journey, users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use. The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to “the last kilometer” problem.

The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability, wide-spread bike vandalism (破壞) and theft, and growing government regulation. A Hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because ‘the GPS devices in the bikes give away users' personal information, such as their locations.”

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2.用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）支持或反對(duì)共享單車的推廣；

（2）用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇還貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version one

The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.

From my standpoint, bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted. Firstly, with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around, the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically, which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams. Furthermore, this service also benefits individuals in various ways. For example, it provides locals and tourists with a convenient, cheap and healthy means of transport. Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don’t need to be concerned about such problems as theft, storage and maintenance.

In a word, bike sharing is an innovative service, which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits. And more shared bikes should be launched into the market. (163 words)

Possible version two

The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.

In my opinion, bike-sharing should not be promoted at present for the following reasons. In order to attract more subscribers, the bike-sharing companies are flooding walkways and other public spaces with hundreds of bikes in the hope of promoting their services, which brings great inconvenience to pedestrians. Furthermore, for lack of relevant regulations, some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared-bikes, for example, by throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly. A fairly high deposit fee has also been criticized in a country familiar with accessing inexpensive public services.

In conclusion, bike-sharing system shouldn’t be promoted before regulations and policies are put in place. The government, companies and users should all play their role in making bike-sharing sustainable and enjoyable. (156 words)

【解析】這是一篇材料作文。寫作內(nèi)容需要結(jié)合材料中所給信息。同學(xué)們?cè)趯戇@篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。2.要按照所給提綱進(jìn)行寫作，第一段用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：（1）支持或反對(duì)共享單車的推廣；（2）用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，以提高文章的檔次；注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，兩方面的內(nèi)容都各自有字?jǐn)?shù)限制。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】所給范文觀點(diǎn)不同，分別是支持和反對(duì)共享單車，但寫作構(gòu)思，文章結(jié)構(gòu)相似。分析第一篇范文:文章層次分明，開頭是簡述信息主要內(nèi)容，中間一段闡述觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用了Firstly，F(xiàn)urthermore來銜接兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，使文章具有連貫性，結(jié)尾用in a word 來進(jìn)行總結(jié)，同時(shí)文章多處運(yùn)用從句，例如"the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically, which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams"中運(yùn)用了which定語從句，給文章增彩。

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