Question

2．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Edward正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語，希望你推薦一個適合他學(xué)習(xí)漢語的網(wǎng)站．請你根據(jù)
以下內(nèi)容，給他回復(fù)郵件．
推薦網(wǎng)站：www．edchinese．com
網(wǎng)站內(nèi)容：
1．網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程：中文情景對話、中國風(fēng)俗、中文電影、中文歌曲、成語和唐詩等；
2．有在線教師答疑解惑．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Edward，
I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．edchinese．com to you．
It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型）
Firstly，it provides you with a variety of online courses，such as Chinese idioms，dialogues and customs．Besides，the website will help you learn Chinese in most interesting and effective ways．Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs，enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies．Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）And at last，the website is free of charge．
I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以郵件形式的作文，注意郵件的格式，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題． 
   亮點(diǎn)說明：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)．比如It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese是定語從句，以及運(yùn)用了It is…for sb．（to do） sth．．此外，文章還使用了大量短語provide sb．with sth．，I'd like to，meet with，turn to sb．for help，free of charge，look forward to，等．插入語most important of all，And at last的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫．
It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型） 
Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）
 I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Edward，
      I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．edchinese．com to you．It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型） 
      Firstly，it provides you with a variety of online courses，such as Chinese idioms，dialogues and customs．Besides，the website will help you learn Chinese in most interesting and effective ways．Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs，enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies．Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）And at last，the website is free of charge． 
      I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．