Question

2．假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Edward正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，希望你推薦一個(gè)適合他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的網(wǎng)站．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)
以下內(nèi)容，給他回復(fù)郵件．
推薦網(wǎng)站：www．edchinese．com
網(wǎng)站內(nèi)容：
1．網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程：中文情景對(duì)話、中國(guó)風(fēng)俗、中文電影、中文歌曲、成語(yǔ)和唐詩(shī)等；
2．有在線教師答疑解惑．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Edward，
I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．edchinese．com to you．
It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型）
Firstly，it provides you with a variety of online courses，such as Chinese idioms，dialogues and customs．Besides，the website will help you learn Chinese in most interesting and effective ways．Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs，enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies．Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）And at last，the website is free of charge．
I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以郵件形式的作文，注意郵件的格式，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題． 
   亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)．比如It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese是定語(yǔ)從句，以及運(yùn)用了It is…for sb．（to do） sth．．此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)provide sb．with sth．，I'd like to，meet with，turn to sb．for help，free of charge，look forward to，等．插入語(yǔ)most important of all，And at last的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫．
It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型） 
Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）
 I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Edward，
      I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．edchinese．com to you．It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型） 
      Firstly，it provides you with a variety of online courses，such as Chinese idioms，dialogues and customs．Besides，the website will help you learn Chinese in most interesting and effective ways．Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs，enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies．Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）And at last，the website is free of charge． 
      I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．