7．假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加你市舉辦的英語(yǔ)演講大賽，已寫(xiě)好演講稿．請(qǐng)給你校的外教Miss Dyson寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)她幫你改稿．
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Dear Miss Dyson，
I am writing to ask for some help．I am going to take part in an English speech contest to be held in my city next month．I have finished writing my speech，but I am not very confident about，it．Are all the sentences in my speech grammatically correct？Are my ideas worth listening to？Will the judges and listeners laugh at me because of my poor language？Therefore，I wonder if you could spare some time to polish it，for which I would be truly grateful．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．
高分句型一：
 I am going to take part in an English speech contest to be held in my city next month．I have finished writing my speech，but I am not very confident aboutit
要參加一個(gè)英語(yǔ)演講比賽將于下個(gè)月在我市舉行．我寫(xiě)完了我的演講，但是我不是很自信．
高分句型二：
Therefore，I wonder if you could spare some time to polish it，for which I would be truly grateful．
因此，我想知道您是否能抽出一些時(shí)間來(lái)潤(rùn)色一下，我會(huì)非常感謝您的．

解答 Dear Miss Dyson，
I am writing to ask for some help．I am going to take part in an English speech contest to be held in my city next month．I have finished writing my speech，but I am not very confident aboutit（高分句型一）．Are all the sentences in my speech grammatically correct？Are my ideas worth listening to？Will the judges and listeners laugh at me because of my poor language？Therefore，I wonder if you could spare some time to polish it，for which I would be truly grateful（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．

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