Question

【題目】“美麗中國”是我國生態(tài)文明建設(shè)的宏偉目標(biāo)。然而生活中一些不文明的現(xiàn)象時有發(fā)生，假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，請你圍繞“美麗中國，美在行動”這一主題，用英語給全國的中學(xué)生寫一封詞數(shù)100左右的倡議書。

注意：

1. 倡議書的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 倡議書中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

A Letter to High School Students

Dear friends,

As we know, “ Beautiful China” is the goal of our Chinese Dream.

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

A Letter to High School Students

Dear friends,

As we know, “Beautiful China” is the goal of our Chinese Dream.

Do you want to live in a beautiful world? So it is our obligation to maintain the ecological balance. To fulfill this task, we should bear the following ecological codes in mind. First, we should stick to the habit of walking to school. It’s also important to recycle everything recyclable and cherish our school’s environment by picking up any litter and turning off the taps and the lights. What’s more, we can also persuade our friends and family members to form environmental life style and good habits.

Let’s all take action now and contribute to the goal to make our country more and more beautiful.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信寫作。主要表達(dá)呼吁全體中學(xué)生杜絕不雅行為，致力于建設(shè)美麗中國，可以提出一些切實可行的建議，題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容，寫作時要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。注意文中所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進(jìn)行一些補充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。書信的格式一定要正確。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點說明】第二段開頭Do you want to live in a beautiful world? 用了一個反問句，設(shè)計巧妙。第二句用了句型it is our obligation to do “做……是我們的義務(wù)”。下面對學(xué)生的行為提出了幾點建議，分別用到first,what’s more, 等邏輯詞，層次分明，邏輯緊密。整篇文章語言言簡意賅，感情真摯，所有要點都沒有遺漏。文章連貫通順。