Question

【題目】如今，我們身邊不乏“低頭族”。他們在與朋友聚會、家人團(tuán)聚或乘坐交通工具時，常常低頭忙于瀏覽手機(jī)。請簡要描述此現(xiàn)象，并發(fā)表你的看法。

提示詞：低頭族phubbing

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語己為你寫好。

Answer 1

【答案】

The phenomenon that people are always phubbing is becoming more and more popular. Some people only stare at the screens of their phones, ignoring the people around them no matter when they take a bus, hold a party or even get together with their families. Worse still, they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games when they cross the road, which is likely to cause serious accidents and threaten their lives.

It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇議論文寫作。首先陳述一個現(xiàn)象，身邊越來越多低頭族，并說明您的一些感受，題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容，寫作時要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。注意文中所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進(jìn)行一些補(bǔ)充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】第一段首先介紹了“低頭族”這一現(xiàn)象的普遍性。然后列舉了這一行為的危害，比如說容易引起交通事故威脅生命健康。用到了worse still 這種插入語，使文章更加生動。最后一段呼吁大家不要做“低頭族”，用到了句型it is high time that...是時候該做某事了。最后一句把動詞do提前，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。整篇文章語言言簡意賅，感情真摯，所有要點(diǎn)都沒有遺漏。文章連貫通順。