Question

【題目】假定你是李華，經(jīng)常與英國(guó)好友 Sandy微信聊天。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的聊天內(nèi)容，并結(jié)合你的感想，寫(xiě)一篇介紹英國(guó)學(xué)校生活的短文，向校報(bào)英文欄目投稿。

注意：1. 請(qǐng)勿提及與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；

3. 詞數(shù)100左右;開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Having chatted with my British friend Sandy, I’ve learned something about school life in theUK.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Having chatted with my British friend Sandy, I’ve learned something about school life in the UK .

First of all, School in Britain starts around 9:00 a.m. and ends about 3:30 p.m. They don't have much homework to do, but it is a bit challenging because the answers are not found in books . Secondly, on average, there are about 30 students in each class. Students there can take part in different after-school activities . They can enjoy naturer, play ball games or do what else they like. The subjects they have to study are English and science, but they can choose some other subjects such as French and history.

In my opinion, they are more relaxed than us but more intensive study will make us progress faster and more suitable for the development of our country.

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹英國(guó)學(xué)校生活的短文，向校報(bào)英文欄目投稿。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重點(diǎn)信息。通過(guò)題目和圖片我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息：第一，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主；第二，人稱(chēng)以第一和第三人稱(chēng)為主；第三，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容主要介紹英國(guó)學(xué)校生活和自己的看法。

第二步：布局段落。要確定主要段落和次要段落，這篇寫(xiě)作應(yīng)分為三段，第一段點(diǎn)明主題，第二段介紹英國(guó)學(xué)校生活，如果內(nèi)容過(guò)多，可以將主要信息在進(jìn)行有層次地劃分，如First of all, Secondly，what’s more等等。第三段說(shuō)明自己的看法。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ)。利用圖表給出的談話(huà)信息，摘取關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ)。如：School in Britain starts, have much homework, a bit challenging, on average，ake part in different after-school activities，enjoy naturer， play ball games or do what else they like，choose some other subjects，such as French and history等等。

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子。圖表中以問(wèn)答形式稱(chēng)給出了主要內(nèi)容信息，此處難點(diǎn)在于將第一人稱(chēng)轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)榈谌�人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行表述，須進(jìn)行句型句式的轉(zhuǎn)換，并發(fā)揮合理想象。如：They don't have much homework to do , but it is a bit challenging because the answers are not found in books .又如：The subjects they have to study are English and science , but they can choose some other subjects such as French and history.

第五步:潤(rùn)色修正。使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接。如: First of all, Secondly，In my opinion等等，使行文流暢。

第六步:注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔。