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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

One day before I was on my way to home from school, I found a building on fire. Immediately I called the firefighters.

Several minute later, the firefighters arrived and tried his best to control the fire. With the help of the firefighters, a lot of people left the building safe. All of sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything. So they couldn’t understand what she said. I went to the woman and asked her what was happened. She told me that her daughter was still in the building. I told the firefighters about it at once. They immediately run into the building and rescued the little girl.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.before 改為when,2.to去掉3.minute 改為minutes 4.his 改為their 5.safe 改為safely 6. 添加to 7.everything nty o something 8.so 改為But ,,9.happened 改為happening 10.run 改為ran

1.before 改為when,

考查連詞。句意：有一天當(dāng)我從學(xué)�；丶視r(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)…。故before 要改為when.

2.to去掉

考查固定搭配。my way home在我回家的路上，為固定搭配。Home為副詞，故去掉to.

3.minute 改為minutes

考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。幾分鐘，要用復(fù)數(shù)，故要加s。.minute 改為minutes

4.his 改為their

考查代詞。the firefighters arrived and tried his best to control the fire消防隊(duì)員來(lái)了，他們盡力控制火勢(shì)。Try their best .故.his 改為their。

5.safe 改為safely

考查副詞。Safely修飾動(dòng)詞leave,故在用副詞來(lái)修飾。故.safe 改為safely

6. 添加to

考查固定搭配。All of a sudden，為固定搭配。突然地。

7.everything 改為 something

考查不定代詞。句意：突然，一位外國(guó)婦女匆匆忙忙地告訴消防隊(duì)員一些事（而不是一切事情）。

8.so 改為But。

考查連詞。句意：但是他們不明白她說(shuō)了什么。表轉(zhuǎn)折的要用but 而不是so.

9.happened 改為happening

考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：我走到那個(gè)婦女那兒?jiǎn)査�發(fā)生了什么事。Happen不能用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。故happened 改為happening

10.run 改為ran

考查時(shí)態(tài)。從文章可知是講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事，故要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以run 改為ran。