【題目】(題文)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(),并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I went shopping with my wife.We had a lot of things to buy.We drive to the centre of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop.An hour late,we came back to the car.But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door.But we asked a policeman for help.He was glad to help us.A few minute later,he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily,“How are you doing with my car?” We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then?We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.

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這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者和自己的妻子去商場(chǎng)購(gòu)物,出來(lái)后發(fā)現(xiàn)汽車(chē)門(mén)打不開(kāi)了,于是叫警察前來(lái)幫忙。當(dāng)打開(kāi)車(chē)門(mén)以后,有一位男子生氣的喊:“你們?cè)趯?duì)我的車(chē)做什么?這時(shí)候作者和妻子看了看汽車(chē)牌照,才意識(shí)到自己認(rèn)錯(cuò)了汽車(chē)。

第一處:考查時(shí)態(tài)。作者在回憶往事,整篇文章都使用的是一般過(guò)去時(shí),這里也應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí),所以drive改成drove。

第二處:考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意:我們開(kāi)車(chē)到市中心,并且把我們的車(chē)停到一家商場(chǎng)前面。in the front of前面(內(nèi)部),in front of前面(外部),所以去掉the。

第三處:考查常見(jiàn)用法!耙粋(gè)小時(shí)之后”應(yīng)該說(shuō)An hour later,這是常見(jiàn)的用法,所以late 改成later。

第四處:考查形容詞。was之后用形容詞作表語(yǔ),所以strangely改成 strange。

第五處:考查連詞。句意:但是很奇怪,我們打不開(kāi)車(chē)門(mén),所以我們讓一個(gè)警察來(lái)幫忙。題干中表示“所以”,所以But改成So。

第六處:考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意:幾分鐘以后,他把門(mén)打開(kāi)了。A few修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù),所以minute改成 minutes。

第七處:考查代詞。句意:你們正在對(duì)我的車(chē)做什么?題干中表示“做什么”,作doing的賓語(yǔ),所以how改成what。

第八處:考查v+ed。我們很吃驚,看了看汽車(chē)的車(chē)牌號(hào)。V+ing修飾物,v+ed修飾人,這里修飾人,所以surprising 改成surprised。

第九處:考查插入語(yǔ)。句意:你認(rèn)為我們那時(shí)做了什么?do you think是插入語(yǔ),所以you之前加do。

第十處:考查固定用法。句意:我們不得不反復(fù)地說(shuō)對(duì)不起。say sorry to sb. 對(duì)……說(shuō)對(duì)不起,該用法是固定用法,所以speak改成say。

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